After saying yes when he definitely shouldn't have, Shade Mystic is transported to a new world, with a new body, and something is wrong with his mind. But it can't get much worse... right?
7364378 there will be gore in the future. Like hearts being ripped out and and devoured kinda gore. Limbs being pulled off, that kinda stuff. I'm just waiting to get to that before I add the tag.
7364939 Sorry lol but he won't get time magic. Maybe someone with time magic will help him fix it, or maybe he'll fix the present and the world will need to find a way to heal. Maybe he will just fail... or maybe he won't try at all? Either way he's stuck with his magic. What would be your favorite ending so far? (Won't actually change how I'm going to end it, but would be fun to know.)
7365065 well i like the idea he can fix it butttt, i think it would be interesting if he failed but he did somthing that sparks a rebellion or kills all demons.
(You are the least demonic demon ever to demon.) I thought while looking at her closely. Yep, theres the eye twitch. "HA, I knew you were reading my mind." "Alright fine, so what if I was. I'm your teacher and I make the rules. What does 'to demon' even mean? That isn't even a thing!' "You're just mad I caught you." "Shut up and go work on your runes!"
She also said she had a surprise for me if I was successful
Why is this rated m?
7364378 there will be gore in the future. Like hearts being ripped out and and devoured kinda gore. Limbs being pulled off, that kinda stuff. I'm just waiting to get to that before I add the tag.
time magic time magic time magic time magic. make him have time magic.
7364939 Sorry lol but he won't get time magic. Maybe someone with time magic will help him fix it, or maybe he'll fix the present and the world will need to find a way to heal. Maybe he will just fail... or maybe he won't try at all? Either way he's stuck with his magic. What would be your favorite ending so far? (Won't actually change how I'm going to end it, but would be fun to know.)
7365065 well i like the idea he can fix it butttt, i think it would be interesting if he failed but he did somthing that sparks a rebellion or kills all demons.
Would you please space your story into paragraphs more often, it is pretty painful to read a solid block of text.
The one and the zero. There going to do it!!!!!
runes*
some more runes, and applied
also
it's runes, not ruins.
You mix up "then" and "than". Constantly. Pretty much every time you use either one, in fact.
It's an interesting concept, but you could really use an editor to fix up the grammar errors and such.