After saying yes when he definitely shouldn't have, Shade Mystic is transported to a new world, with a new body, and something is wrong with his mind. But it can't get much worse... right?
"OW what the fucking shit my head! What the hell I can't see-"I proceeded to test out my surroundings but learned I was restrained for my own safety, how considerate of them.
I think you mean: "OW! What the fuck! My head! What the hell I can't see-" I proceeded to test out my surroundings, but learned I was restrained for my own safety, how considerate of them.
Im going to rip your fucking limbs off if you don't let me go! Oh god why me..."
I think you mean: I'm going to rip your fucking limbs off if you don't let me go! Oh god, why me..."
Is that where I am... than why am i blinded and restrained? "Alright, ill leave the insults alone if you would kindly tell me why I'm restrained and blinded." The captain spoke with laughter failing to hide in his voice "Ehh you can tell em lieutenant. This'll be good." The lieutenant acknowledged this with a tone of misery. "Well you see... you're currently at the private infirmary in the capital of the Phoenix Empire." She said this with no small amount of pride in her voice" During a routine patrol of me and Gifford here-" so thats the jackass's gentlemen's name "-you suddenly appeared over us and... um."
I think you mean: So that where I am... then why am I blinded and restrained? "Alright, I'll leave the insults alone, if you would kindly tell me why I'm restrained and blinded." The captain spoke with poorly hidden laughter in his voice "Ehh you can tell em' lieutenant. This'll be good." The lieutenant acknowledged this with a tone of misery. "Well you see... you're currently at the private infirmary in the capital of the Phoenix Empire." She said this with no small amount of pride in her voice. "During a routine patrol of me and Gifford here-" so that's the jackass's gentlemen's name "-you suddenly appeared over us and... um."
Did his accent just worsen? I actually wanted to see that and in no way was I embarrassed, or wanting to distract them from such a riveting tale. "I would love to see that but I'm still kinda blinded over here." "Oh right let me get that for you" he replied as his accent... disappeared? Wtf? And my headaches completely gone. As he started removing what ever was blinding me the, still nameless, lieutenant continued the story. "Yes well, after the incident we checked you over, to find you had a very bad case of teleportation sickness-" "Something only cubs get just so you know." Gifford kindly let me know, still, no accent. "-... yes well as I was saying, before I was rudely interrupted. We found you lying there sick with a very bad case of teleportation sickness rarely seen in adults." Wow, he was telling the truth, shit. Wait hold on did they say teleportation? "As you are an unidentified creature we brought you here to be treated and observed, to determine if you are hostile, and what you're doing here."
I think you mean: Did his accent just worsen? I actually wanted to see that and in no way was I embarrassed, or wanting to distract them from such a riveting tale. "I would love to see that, but I'm still kinda blinded over here." "Oh right, let me get that for you" he replied as his accent... disappeared? What the fuck? And my headaches have completely disappeared. As he started removing whatever was blinding me the -still nameless,- lieutenant continued the story. "Yes well, after the incident we checked you over, to find you had a very bad case of teleportation sickness-" "Something only cubs get just so you know." Gifford kindly let me know, still, no accent. "-... yes well as I was saying before I was rudely interrupted. We found you lying there sick with a very bad case of teleportation sickness rarely seen in adults." Wow, he was telling the truth, shit. Wait hold on did they say teleportation? "As you are an unidentified creature we brought you here to be treated and observed, to determine if you are hostile, and what you're doing here."
The narrative is rather nonsensical. The sarcasm is funny, but it is overdone. A couple of them here or there makes it funny. Too many and it becomes tedious and needlessly repetitive. Not the worst start I have seen, but unless some things change, this story may not be for me. Nothing personal.
wow this is surprisingly good! Its so hard to find good ones anymore
I think you mean:
"OW! What the fuck! My head! What the hell I can't see-" I proceeded to test out my surroundings, but learned I was restrained for my own safety, how considerate of them.
I think you mean:
I'm going to rip your fucking limbs off if you don't let me go! Oh god, why me..."
I think you mean:
So that where I am... then why am I blinded and restrained? "Alright, I'll leave the insults alone, if you would kindly tell me why I'm restrained and blinded."
The captain spoke with poorly hidden laughter in his voice "Ehh you can tell em' lieutenant. This'll be good."
The lieutenant acknowledged this with a tone of misery. "Well you see... you're currently at the private infirmary in the capital of the Phoenix Empire." She said this with no small amount of pride in her voice. "During a routine patrol of me and Gifford here-" so that's the
jackass'sgentlemen's name "-you suddenly appeared over us and... um."I think you mean:
Did his accent just worsen? I actually wanted to see that and in no way was I embarrassed, or wanting to distract them from such a riveting tale. "I would love to see that, but I'm still kinda blinded over here."
"Oh right, let me get that for you" he replied as his accent... disappeared? What the fuck? And my headaches have completely disappeared.
As he started removing whatever was blinding me the -still nameless,- lieutenant continued the story. "Yes well, after the incident we checked you over, to find you had a very bad case of teleportation sickness-"
"Something only cubs get just so you know." Gifford kindly let me know, still, no accent.
"-... yes well as I was saying before I was rudely interrupted. We found you lying there sick with a very bad case of teleportation sickness rarely seen in adults." Wow, he was telling the truth, shit. Wait hold on did they say teleportation? "As you are an unidentified creature we brought you here to be treated and observed, to determine if you are hostile, and what you're doing here."
I shall continue soonish...
The narrative is rather nonsensical. The sarcasm is funny, but it is overdone. A couple of them here or there makes it funny. Too many and it becomes tedious and needlessly repetitive. Not the worst start I have seen, but unless some things change, this story may not be for me. Nothing personal.
WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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OMG FENEKKU KITSUNE ADORABABBU'S!
Screaming. The next best thing to acting sensible.
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Yeah I'm feeling this way, too. Definitely a little excessive.