• Published 18th Apr 2016
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Head Trauma - RayDawn



Everything has been going great for me now that I started talking, well writing, about the night I lost my voice. I have been going to Dr. Discord, famed therapist . One day, on the way there I am greeted by a face from my past, and he is terrifying.

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Welp this is the end it was fun and to think, this was my idea to continue this :pinkiehappy:
I'm sorry it's just my ideas are usually don't come out goodand they usually backfire and... mep:fluttershyouch:

7428385 Really, I thought it was a great idea! Again, I want to thank you for the idea it was fun to write (even though I took forever) and it wasn't difficult. You shouldn't sell yourself short.

7428405 Your welcome.

Dude I was rereading WHY I'M LOUD and realize a problem with Vinyl talking at the end

"What does that mean doc?"
"It means that Vinyl will be mute for the rest of her life. "

a slight edit to that part and the whole problem is fixed

7428504 Thanks for pointing that out! To EDITING! (rushes off)

7428504 Fixed it. Now it says that Vinyl COULD be mute for the rest of her life. Thank you so much. I had a mini heart attack for a second.

Well, at least Vinyl didn't get in trouble with the law for killing that scumball. I wonder what the cops had to say after Vinyl was found?

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