I really like the dynamic between AJ and Pinkie, and how Pinkie slowly brings AJ into this new world. It's nice to see how Applejack reacts to all of this and how she comes to terms with her inner thoughts, worries and desires; as well as her growing feelings for Pinkie. A lot of stories skip straight to the action and go all out right away. But this feel a lot more natural, and it's the journey that matters. It's not perfect ( no story is ) but it's a enjoyable ride. Looking forward to the next chapter.
nice to see an update to this. there are a few spelling mistakes you might want to check for though. just a heads up
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Yeah quite a few spelling errors, missing " here and there but other than that really good. Looking forward to where your going with it.
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Got my editor on it but glad you guys like it
7634211 You are most welcome.
I really like the dynamic between AJ and Pinkie, and how Pinkie slowly brings AJ into this new world. It's nice to see how Applejack reacts to all of this and how she comes to terms with her inner thoughts, worries and desires; as well as her growing feelings for Pinkie. A lot of stories skip straight to the action and go all out right away. But this feel a lot more natural, and it's the journey that matters. It's not perfect ( no story is ) but it's a enjoyable ride. Looking forward to the next chapter.
7806310 I like that kinkipie I hope to have a new chap up soon
Loving this!
Can't wait to see how far down the rabbit hole AJ can go?
this is a great story, but the grammar makes it extremely difficult to enjoy. i don't remember it being this bad in the earlier chapters.
7810940 my editor kinda disappeared on me still looking for a new one.
7810992 ah, that makes sense.