Sometimes, life just happens. Other times, like for me, it ends. I thought nothing was going to happen. Now, I'm in Equestria, seen as a monster by all but a few. But it doesn't matter. I'm a Tenno now. I fight. It's all I know.
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6993075 They can wall run, wall jump, double jump, are masters in every weapon. And besides, most people who play the game call them ninjas, and even the advertising basically says they're ninjas, as it says "Ninjas play free", and it is a free to play.
6993075 Ninjas play free, said after every video. Dude they're ninjas.
6991835 Names of abilities are in the lower right hand corner of the players HUD.
6993439 Thanks. And, also, what do you think of the frame choices so far?
6993490 Zephyr is practically a no brainer, Mag makes a lot of sense, Equinox is good, or since AJ is a country girl Mesa based of a western gunslinger, I suggest Trinity for Fluttershy, As for Pinkie and Rarity. Mirage is a good choice for Pinkie, Rarity, with the Saryn Orphid skin, because that skin in game is beautiful.
still think Valkir is a better choice for AJ but hey its your story man.
Love it can't wait for the next chapter!
Interesting choice for the frames...
holy buck this song was playing
and its sever thunderstorms/raining outside made it sound like an army marching to the song (the heavy beating of rain on my window)
edit: oh buck there's tornado sirens going off
Okay, pretty sure I've said this on your previous stories, but... You need to learn to put more detail into your writing. Descriptions of places, smells, tastes, hell, even thoughts. And, most importantly, if you want to add some real spirit into your stories, (apologies in advance if that sounds rude or insulting) add actions after each piece of dialogue. For instance, instead of ending each dialogue sentence with, "said", "replied", "answered", or "responded", use more descriptive terms, and then add an action, like a grin, hand motion, head motion, eye motion, anything that fits.
Here's an example.
In short, add more meat to your story.
I hope this helps, my friend. I hope to see you improve in the near future.