CMS: The Third Generation

by RomanceWriter1

Will You Notice How I Feel About You?

Author's Note:

Got all the characters for the next spin off sorted and I will get to it soon. And first song number in this spin off (that I used for the first story of Coltland Chronicles except I changed one word or two)and there will be a second one that I will try and parody the song On My Own (love the 2012 film of Les Miserables) and I was listening to a bit of the soundtrack on my phone.

Will You Notice How I Feel About You?

"So, any more ideas on how to get our cutie marks?" Bubble asked as she put up a blank sheet of paper onto the wall of the treehouse.

"Nope." Starshine replied in a sad voice and she laid her head down onto her forelegs.

"We tried everything like ice skating, skateboarding like what Skater would do." Moonlight said with defeat and she did the same thing as Starshine.

"Should we just give up and maybe do this in some years or so?" Hugh asked and Bubble looked at them with surprise then flew off the soapbox she was using and landed in front of them.

"Are you kidding me, Searchers? We'll never give up!" Bubble replied with a surprise and a small smile then she opened her mouth to sing:

"We've been searching for our destinies

For some years now

Trying to find out how we belong

So many times we've tried before

But we will never give up"

The others then began to sing:

"Because we will keep searching"

Then the five friends all sung together:

"We'll find our destinies

No matter how long

We'll find our destinies

When we're to discover

The ultimate prize of our destinies!"

"Now that's more like it, best friends." Moonlight said with a smile and she wrapped her forelegs around them all and they are had a group hug.

Monday came and it was lunchtime at the high school and Hugh sat facing away from his friends and stared at Poppy as she was sitting with Spar and laughing with him. Hugh sighed a little then hung his head down in defeat.

Oh, Poppy, when will you see how I feel about you? Hugh thought to himself and Jacinto looked at his twin brother.

"Did you say something, Hugh?" Moonlight asked with a look of concern on his face.

Hugh widened his eyes, he didn't realise that he actually said the words not thought of them.

"No, no, I didn't say anything." Hugh replied nervously. "Are you sure? I thought I heard you say something about Poppy." Bubble responded with the same tone that Moonlight gave.

Hugh shook his head then went back to eat his lunch. It was home time and the five friends walked home with Hugh slowly behind them.

"Come on, let's go to my house and have a sleepover!" Starshine squealed with excitement.

"You coming, Hugh?" Moonlight asked and Hugh lifted his head and looked at her.

"I'll catch up with you guys later, right now I just need to go for a walk and think of something." Hugh replied with a small, reassuring smile.

"Okay, we'll see you later." Starshine said with a grin and they all trotted off with Hugh still standing there and it suddenly began to rain.

He then opened his mouth to sing:

"I love her

Imagining she's with me

I'm all alone

Watching her everyday

Without her

I feel her forelegs around me

And when I am feeling lonely, I close my eyes

And I see her"

Hugh then walked into the forest as it continued to rain and he continued:

"With the rain, the puddles are like mirrors

All the clouds, are grey in the sky

In the night, the stars are very sparkly

All I see is me and her together and forever

And I know that in my head

She is talking to Spar and not to me

And even though I know she's blind

I still think, we can still be together

I love her

But when school's over

She is gone

The clouds are just clouds

Without her

The colours I see start changing

Every colour is going grey

There is nopony around"

Hugh then walked over to a bench and sat on it:

"I love her

But everyday I'm thinking

About what I can do

Without her

My world will be not be turning

A world that's full of sadness

That I may always have"

He then started to cry:

"I love her

I love her

I love her

But I'm too afraid"

He then got off the bench and slowly walked off home.

"Oh, Poppy, I hope you will realise how I feel about you." Hugh said with a saddened voice and he wiped his eyes so that Jacinto or the others wouldn't suspect that he had been crying.

Comments

[Stardom Freedom]

6969174
Really? Huh. I live in America. Also, in DF's fic, the foals were 10-11, but they were in fourth and fifth grade. Just thought I'd point that out.

6969179
Try to work on that weakness. You can't just have some foals at the bowling alley, then, without describing how it happened, they end up at, I dunno, a library. Read some featured stories, or plain stories you like. It may help you strengthen your description.

[RomanceWriter1]

6969587

Thanks for the advice I'll try that and I also don't know much about American education despite watching so many American shows