In this, there'll be many different stories, starring YOU! Well, you'll be fucked by the mares of Equestria who've been given something extra~ Can you handle them?
I have to ask. I know this is clop, so anything goes, but was Twilight the only mare here that was not a futa naturally? I am also guessing that (your name) is a pegasus. If not, how were you able to stay on the cloud?
6959552 Well, to answer you're first question, Rainbow Dash just went to Twilight to ask for the spell and had it casted onto her. To answer your second question, I don't know what people's OC's are. Earth Pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, so basically I just went pegasus for this one. Or you could say Twilight casted that spell that allows non pegasi to walk on clouds
Good story. I did feel that there was a bit to much run-off-the-mill small talk, but there was able to picture Rainbow Dash saying evreything that you put in her voice, which tells me that you accurately replicated her personality. Few do that very well. :) I look forward to reading the others! <3
Rarity!!!
Rarity huh? Hm, first I wanna get at least two more votes. But if one doesn't show up soon, I'll make the Rarity one, k?
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Rarity, please.
Alrighty, two votes for Rarity. I guess Rarity's up next!
I have to ask. I know this is clop, so anything goes, but was Twilight the only mare here that was not a futa naturally? I am also guessing that (your name) is a pegasus. If not, how were you able to stay on the cloud?
6959552 Well, to answer you're first question, Rainbow Dash just went to Twilight to ask for the spell and had it casted onto her. To answer your second question, I don't know what people's OC's are. Earth Pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, so basically I just went pegasus for this one. Or you could say Twilight casted that spell that allows non pegasi to walk on clouds
Pinkie Pie
Sorry everyone! Already have votes in for Rarity next chapter! But make sure to vote next chapter!
Another self-insert fic? A furry one at that. Here, have a dislike.
Rarity
6959629 I think it would be better to simply have the "reader" be referred to in a more ambiguous sense.
Instead of
it could be
This would allow more self-expression for the readers.
Also I would suggest spending a little bit more time checking over your grammar, it could use some improvement.
Nice story so far
Good story. I did feel that there was a bit to much run-off-the-mill small talk, but there was able to picture Rainbow Dash saying evreything that you put in her voice, which tells me that you accurately replicated her personality. Few do that very well. :) I look forward to reading the others! <3