In this, there'll be many different stories, starring YOU! Well, you'll be fucked by the mares of Equestria who've been given something extra~ Can you handle them?
If the MC thought Rainbow Dash was strong, then how will an Earth Pony like Applejack or Pinkie Pie feel, given both of them have or had jobs which tend to build lots of muscles? Not to mention their size...
That aside, overall could be better, plenty of misspellings and whatnot, but could be much worse. The choice to use "(YOUR NAME)" however instead of the standard "Anon" or "you" basically just immediately kills any immersion in the story completely.
Finally... Applejack. Cuz I saw a sexy futa picture of her yesterday.
These two words should change places.
mouth
As for my votes, in order: Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy.
Applejack.
Why is marecock so hot?!
AJ
Pinkie
AJ please
If the MC thought Rainbow Dash was strong, then how will an Earth Pony like Applejack or Pinkie Pie feel, given both of them have or had jobs which tend to build lots of muscles? Not to mention their size...
I think the dicks should be about 25-30% bigger.
That aside, overall could be better, plenty of misspellings and whatnot, but could be much worse. The choice to use "(YOUR NAME)" however instead of the standard "Anon" or "you" basically just immediately kills any immersion in the story completely.
I want to see fluttershy