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Interesting. There were a few errors though, but I got the gist of it. As for who's next, maybe a pegasus that watched what was happening outside a window? A cyan colored one? Also, Spike should get some type of cumeuppance for leaving (your name) high and dry like that.
6958910 I agree I think Rainbow Dash should be next
Hm...thanks for the suggestions! I'll add that in! I guess Rainbow Dash is up next
Moar
6958984 And moar you shall receive
Rarity!!!
Rarity huh? Hm, first I wanna get at least two more votes. But if one doesn't show up soon, I'll make the Rarity one, k?
6959266 k
Rarity, please.
Alrighty, two votes for Rarity. I guess Rarity's up next!
I have to ask. I know this is clop, so anything goes, but was Twilight the only mare here that was not a futa naturally? I am also guessing that (your name) is a pegasus. If not, how were you able to stay on the cloud?
6959552 Well, to answer you're first question, Rainbow Dash just went to Twilight to ask for the spell and had it casted onto her. To answer your second question, I don't know what people's OC's are. Earth Pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, so basically I just went pegasus for this one. Or you could say Twilight casted that spell that allows non pegasi to walk on clouds
Pinkie Pie
Sorry everyone! Already have votes in for Rarity next chapter! But make sure to vote next chapter!
Conceptually, I liked it. But you really need a proofreader for all those typos.
Another self-insert fic? A furry one at that. Here, have a dislike.
Rarity
6959629 I think it would be better to simply have the "reader" be referred to in a more ambiguous sense.
Instead of
it could be
This would allow more self-expression for the readers.
Also I would suggest spending a little bit more time checking over your grammar, it could use some improvement.
Nice story so far
Finally... Applejack. Cuz I saw a sexy futa picture of her yesterday.
These two words should change places.
mouth
As for my votes, in order: Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy.
Applejack.
Why is marecock so hot?!
AJ
Pinkie
AJ please
If the MC thought Rainbow Dash was strong, then how will an Earth Pony like Applejack or Pinkie Pie feel, given both of them have or had jobs which tend to build lots of muscles? Not to mention their size...
I think the dicks should be about 25-30% bigger.
That aside, overall could be better, plenty of misspellings and whatnot, but could be much worse. The choice to use "(YOUR NAME)" however instead of the standard "Anon" or "you" basically just immediately kills any immersion in the story completely.
I want to see fluttershy
I'd say both that be awesome.like Pinkies doing it for fun so she talks Futtershy to do it with her so you could be better friends.
7117348
I'm partial to agree
i think this would be a good time to add non main 6 after chapter this as in Big Mac and the CMC (Age up or legal age there) i feel this could be a good starting point for them... like Big mac walks in on them right after this act/ or smell u as ur leaving and gets him worked up ... or the CMC when ur walking home from the barn as ur cross there club house sweetie belle could be showing the spell she "borrow" from her sister book (the futa spell) and used it on the other CMC and need help revealing them self's
and what sizes u think they should be
7117730 yes, I thought about that too. But I'm afraid I have to stick to my voting system. There are only two more ponies left in the mane 6, so you'll see other ponies soon!
Futashy!!! Duh!
Fluttershy. And handjob. Ballgag.
Fluttershy should be last because she's the biggest.
I'm going to have to vote for Pinkie. I really want to see Fluttershy but I agree. Save the biggest for last.
I will also vote for pinkie to save the biggest for last.
i'd love to see two stallions show (you) how the studs of ponyville have a good time XD.
Yay! Futashy is next!!!
Sombra. Queen sombra.
by all the gods this IS my fetish!!!!
Gg
I wonder what the princesses would be
...Why do I want this to end with Twilight giving his dick an enhancement as an apology before they ALL try for a second chance at him?
When's the next update? I would hate for this story to end like some others have.
Oh pleeeeeeeeeease don't give up on this story. I'm loving every second of it. And it just won't be complete for me til it gets to my fave of the main 6. (1guess who)
So, is a certain yellow destroyer ever going to grace us with her presence?
This wait is unbearable D:
I demand Fluttershy's cock become an inch longer for every week of waiting. x3