In this, there'll be many different stories, starring YOU! Well, you'll be fucked by the mares of Equestria who've been given something extra~ Can you handle them?
Interesting. There were a few errors though, but I got the gist of it. As for who's next, maybe a pegasus that watched what was happening outside a window? A cyan colored one? Also, Spike should get some type of cumeuppance for leaving (your name) high and dry like that.
"It does that!" She said, smiling. You looked confused and asked. "Does what?" Once again, she charged up and shot another thin beam at your head. "That!" She said again. And again, you looked confused. "Does what?"
Interesting. There were a few errors though, but I got the gist of it. As for who's next, maybe a pegasus that watched what was happening outside a window? A cyan colored one? Also, Spike should get some type of cumeuppance for leaving (your name) high and dry like that.
6958910 I agree I think Rainbow Dash should be next
Hm...thanks for the suggestions! I'll add that in! I guess Rainbow Dash is up next
Moar
6958984 And moar you shall receive
Conceptually, I liked it. But you really need a proofreader for all those typos.