Wow. This stort has probably one of the best concepts I've read so far. Can't wait for more!

7398930 Wow, thank you very much! Don't you worry, soon there will be plenty more! I just wish I the dislikes weren't pouring in so fast

this story is a lot better then your last ones, I like the air of mystery that in running around about Radium. I can't wait to see more of this story again.

7402659 Thanks a bunch I know I'm far from the best writer around and I do like to think my work improves as I go on I know it's probably a bit overdue but have a follow. You've been such a loyal follower of my stories for quite some time so I'll return the favor

Okay, a HiE crossover with Equestrian fic is one I usually run away from but, your story has me saying:

MOAR

if you could

It was at that moment when heavy weapons brony realized that his beloved princesses needed him. So with the spirit of Cheeki breeki burning inside of him HWB put on his radiation proof adiads, strapped his five gallon vodka flask to his hip , filled his pockets with bolts and picked up his AKSU (promptly names "the Cheeki breeki point and clicky.") And ventured off towards the zone to find Celestia's lost lover.

I'm sorry you have a fan that's absessed with the S.T.A.L.K.E.R universe.

But srsly as a gift to me and other hardcore STALKER fans who read this, could you name the guy Celestia hires to go into the zone " Redrick Schuhart"? Only the most Cheeki of Breeki will recognize the name of the first STALKER in the STALKER universe.

7403033 I'll see what I can do because you and my other readers like you deserve such a gift If not that actual name maybe something similar as I plan on (spoiler alert) having Celestia not only have a human guide who knows the area but also she will hire a certain blue pegasus, a particular guard captain among a few others and even brave the dangers herself. I'll be cooking up some ideas for the next chapter in the kitchen upstairs and see what kinds of things will come of it.

7403392 well I'd advise to Google the charcter. He's really good. Everyone calls him red. At heart he's a nice guy but he'll cut any throat for either his family or the right price, he smokes alot and has been to jail. If you took this or made a similar character I wouldn't call it a rip off just a cool little homage to the book that gave birth to one of my favorite fictional universes.

7403524 I will see what I can do. I didn't want to actually make this story into a S.T.A.L.K.E.R. crossover mostly because I know little to nothing about it but for you and my other wonderful readers, I'll see if I can sneak in a reference and/or make a guy with a different name but similar personality traits. Thanks for following this

7402886 it's no problem, I like your stories and you are always fun to talk to, which help enhance the experience to me. I always look forward to see you next chapter.

7403562 well if you that worried why don't you give the book hes in "roadside picnic." It's a short story, I pounded it out in 2 hours and it's a great read. You can find it free online on a PDF. I will warn you that it's a short story, so there know exposition so to just have to assume the alot (a lot of good journalists have broken down the story just Google " roadside picnic explained") it's also translated from Russian so the wording is a bit weird. Also I don't know how much you know about the S.T.A.L.K.E.R storyline but forget it all when you read the book. The biggest difference is the zone in S.T.A.L.K.E.R was caused by the second Chernobyl disaster were as in Roadside Picnic the zone came off radiation and trash left by visiting aliens . it's a cool read I recommend it regardless or weather or not you use Red from the book.

7403804 Alright, I'll look into that once I find the time. Either way I think I already have a pretty good idea but it will still be a few chapters away. I think you'll like it though.

Okay, I can see that you made Luna a bit more of the “controlling/concerned mother” type, with her constantly reminding her sister to not curse or drink.

Not that this is a bad thing. I just am used to Celestia being the responsible one, especially when she wasn't the on who nearly caused the end of the world during a temper tantrum...

That is my personal opinion, and please, don't be tailoring the story to my, or anypony else's whims. Seriously, you have to learn the difference between critique, criticism, and personal opinion.

In any case, on to the next chapter.