Now for some actual story commentary:

So far I'm digging the story.

In depth I know.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Well hate to see Twilight explode like Sunset said....thou don't think she mind if it was Sci Twilight clothes that exploded only.

Uh-oh, Cinch. She probably felt good feelings in the school. Violates policy you know.

But yeeeeees, let the TwiSet flooooow.

[Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! Principal Cinch in a bathing suit!

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Twilight asking out Sunset was really cute. And it was funny seeing Twilight make pudding in a beaker and on a budson burner while using scientific names for the ingredients.

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Yout mean SunLight

Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! she mentally chanted to herself. Gah! Too much, too much!

Excellent wording! Lovin it so far and its only the first chapter!

There's a method to my madness."

There's just so much god damn weight on your shoulders that you can't just live your motherfucking life. The story's getting old and my heart is getting colder. I just wanna be Jekyll but I'm always fighting Hyde. You've got rocks in your head I can hear them rolling ‘round. You can say that you're above it but you're always falling down. Is there a method to your madness is it all about pride? Everyone I know THEY GOT A DEMON INSIDE!!!

Couldn't help it.

G-Great!" Twilight exclaimed, flapping the paper as hard as she could. Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! she mentally chanted to herself. Gah! Too much, too much!

LOL that was so funny

in every image, Sunny wore far more books than clothes

Oh Twilight, never change

I mean, I can be a bit book-obsessed at times, but even I'm not nearly THAT bad!

Nerds in love are so cute. Great story.

"...at least twenty percent more careful.

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Knees weak, arms spaghetti

"G-Great!" Twilight exclaimed, flapping the paper as hard as she could. Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! Principal Cinch in a bathing suit! she mentally chanted to herself. Gah! Too much, too much!

How can anyone NOT like this ship? They're adorable and PERFECT for each other