Kinda left a burning feeling.
I will think of better I swear.

Uh huh....

Take off your drawers, Anon. It's time to reveal your true power level.

Fail berry fail lets just say you got your self into a shit storm.

6951069
no
No
Shut up
No

6951069 IT OVER 9,000!!!!!

One room over I can still hear an occasional anguished cry from somepony who's tipped over the punch bowl. Again. That pony had been me only a few weeks ago, and I had decided I was done for the evening when I saw it start happening tonight. It brought my mood down, and I had no desire to bring down the mood of the party with me. I figured Vinyl would be next to tip the thing, as she's been threatening to launch herself against tables and walls while trying to "crowdsurf" for a while. No one really seemed to be complaining either. It was nice to see everyone so happy, but not at the expense of my own bitterness or all-too ready ability to completely kill the mood.

Decide now in wich world you are.....Human or pony? because one of the verbs here must be wrong! Oo

I had come to get a little rest in Applejack's littlest guest bedroom while

little

What the fuck.

buck

My mind is made up, and I creep quietly to the bed with all the stealth of a weird purple ninja.

How About we change it to "My mind is made up, and i creep quietly to bed with all the stealthyness that a weird purple ninja can muster."?

Oh my god, this fucking guy...

"So, get the fuck out of my bed!" I practically yell and give him another strong kick for good measure.

Oh for Celestia sake, This Bucking guy...

"So, get the buck out of my bed!" I pratically yell and give him another strong kick for good measure.

your onesome?"

Lonesome

Fuck.

Buck

"I'll fucking do it," I say, smiling.

bucking

Hehehem this looks interesting... very, I like Berry and this looks cool.
Nice job.

I wonder how this will end~

I don't know why, but her suddenly kicking him out of bed with her hoofs had me rolling! Nice story so far! Only on the first chapter!

damn, a berrypunch and anon ship?

They sound like they're suffering from...depression,

Either that, or they are both highly antisocial and awkward, and lack the energy to be around a mobnof ponies.
Gawd only knows being around people can drain the life right out of you. Sometimes you're just not up to it. (That's why I've never been to a party)

Ah
That feeling of finding and cracking open a fresh new (old) story of a ship I've newly found. By you nevertheless.
Let's see how this train goes.