this is a story of how quickly life can change from good to bad to worse. While also having some fun along the way, this is a story of being ripped out of one life and put in a new one, what would you do differently if you had the chance.
Whenever I copy paste them here, the spacing shows up... but in the story itself, the spaces are missing. This line is the first example. Probably a graphical glitch, but you should read the story for yourself to see what I mean.
"What! Nopony should be able to shrug off a direct hit like that. The rumors about wizards must be true after all" he moved backwards towards his companion his eyes turning towards backup while his head remained fixed in my direction.
Ok, finally gave it a read... the prose needs work, but a displaced Natsu Dragneeel/Ōkami(?) Displaced is a pretty interesting concept... is this one open to crosses?
7621018 not an okami a kitsune okami was a wbite wolf amatarasu. It was my original idea to go with okami but I changed it in the end. What do you mean by crosses?
7728813 thanks I'm. Working on it albeit slowly with all the university projectstudents iv got, I'll try to get the next chapter done as soon as I can.
Shit about to go down.
Dude... did you say this was edited? It doesn't look edited... there aren't even spaces in between a lot of these words... it's unreadable...
7618656 what do you mean? if you could point out an example. thanks
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Whenever I copy paste them here, the spacing shows up... but in the story itself, the spaces are missing. This line is the first example. Probably a graphical glitch, but you should read the story for yourself to see what I mean.
7619886 alright ill give it a look. thanks
7619886 nothing coming up on my end. anyone els getting this.?
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Maybe it's just me...
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Ok, finally gave it a read... the prose needs work, but a displaced Natsu Dragneeel/Ōkami(?) Displaced is a pretty interesting concept... is this one open to crosses?
7621018 not an okami a kitsune okami was a wbite wolf amatarasu. It was my original idea to go with okami but I changed it in the end. What do you mean by crosses?
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Crosses with other Displaced stories. It's one of their main hallmarks
7627760 yeah of course it is wouldn't be a displaced story without it.
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Good... good....
BADASS!
MORE! PLEASE!
7728813 thanks I'm. Working on it albeit slowly with all the university projectstudents iv got, I'll try to get the next chapter done as soon as I can.
Realy good story 2 best kitsune story iv read on this site
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Thanks, I appreciate that.
When is the next update
7896712 the chaptersame done it's just being edited so not to long.
#crimson fucker
Hay guys haws health plan
Apparently it’s great
Hellsing abridged reference