>chapter length: 8,011
>story length: 5,199

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7757697 it probably has something to do with that thing i mentioned in the author's notes where i re-balanced the chapter length because the second chapter was 10k words which is too much. the first chapter was initially around 5k so it's probably displaying that? for some reason? i don't care enough to fix it.

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Long-standing fimfiction bug. Chapter word count gets updated after each edit to the chapter; story word count is only updated when you publish a chapter.

You can fix it by quickly unpublishing and republishing the chapter. Alternatively, once you publish a second chapter, it should resolve itself.

Wait there's no more???? What the fuck? Write mooorrrreee pleeeeasssee! Oh and this gets a fav

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the second chapter is already finished, and will be posted early next week.

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yeah, not worth the effort to fix it. it'll fix itself when i post the other half.

7758000 Next week!? That sooo far away but I'll wait ;-;

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You need to press the "publish" button on the chapter twice. It's not a lot of effort. Less effort than typing the comment that I'm replying to.

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Please tell me cum inflation will be in the next chapter. I can't wait to see Applebloom get her brains fucked out.

The most logical explaination I can see after reading this is Apple Bloom never really did wake up. She is still sleeping and the nightmare warpes Diamond Tiara.

Finally, a fic where the character is exposed to bullshit and is not only upset, but actually enraged by it. Lookin' forward to the rest of it.

This has my attention...

That crazy.....crazy awesome I love this xD

I hate how hot this was, because if this was truly what Diamond deserves, it would be the exact opposite of what's going on right now, that uppity little bitch becoming humble by way of brutal fucking.

*opens door*
You are all weirdos!...
*Close the door*

I love your writing. So hot. What really surprised me is the arm wrestling itself, I don't remember seeing anywhere before the event that it was indeed planned, but I might just not have paid attention. That or it's just another thing in the world that changed for... Some reason.

Reads first chapter
Ok... it seem DT is mindcontrolling the majority (salutesmajor ity!) of the city ... I wonder how