(sees Steel Resolve send me the link to this story)

"... Awwwww. Riiiiiiight."

I can't believe you actually did it... xD And it's everything I could have hoped for. Oh man. Wow. Fleur is SO. BUCKING. HOT. Moar!

Commence read.

Doldrums, new word.

Luna, that temptress...luckily Fluer helps resolve that misunderstanding.

Love the banter between them, shall await some more.

I feel like it's a rare thing to find a story so well written that I'd fave on the first chapter, and this is definitely one of those stories. Your voicing and portrayal of all three characters, as well as their dialogue, is stellar. This is also very well-written in general, is intriguing, and it's pretty damned sexy. Seriously, you're downvoters are crazy!

I am now awaiting new chapters with great anticipation.

7006527 I don't worry about downvotes on a mature content story very much. You tend to attract knee jerk reactions instead of real feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.

This is best Fluer.

So much French. I'm not complaining, though.

7007055 Yeah... Fleur is so little seen in the show, and I wanted her to lapse into french every once in a while.

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Point is, I'm a sucker for foreign languages, so even that much drew me in. Kudos.

This is marvelous, only one chapter in and I am already in love with this story.

I don't believe I've seen this combination before. I'm not sure Celestia would approve.

I'm a great fan of Green . So this little tidbit with fleur , fancy, and luna really makes me look forward to future chapters . Now I have to go binge on the last few Green chapters I've yet to finish reading "obsessing over"

~Blessed be ! :TheRandomKitty

7009524 Current chapters are what inspired this back story. My prereaders demanded it.

I quite enjoyed this, and will be looking forward to more.

7009708 are you going to continue working on this?

7019282 I'm already working on a second chapter. I wouldn't have put out the first with no intent to finish it.

I adore the way this is written, so sophisticated and very... French.

A wonderful read so far.
Slow pacing, but it is excellent for a story like this.
Patiently waiting for more

Argh. I MUST comment before I've gotten more than a few paragraphs in: MON coeur. It's masculine! Mon cher, ma cherie (with the accent on the first e that I can't do on this tablet).

7033946 And I've been paying attention to who is addressing whom, too. I'll skype you.

Very nice. Interesting to see this fleshed out.

I am very excited for this story! I love your characterisation of Luna and Fleur so much. A story primarily on them is pretty much guaranteed to be great. I am now eagerly awaiting the next chapter. (Late to read this one as I am.)

Falcon Punches the story.

MOAR!