Another night, another party. Fleur De Lis has grown horribly bored of it. Sleep holds little appeal, as does gossip. But somepony new has arrived. Dark, alluring, and interesting. Perhaps the night need not be so dull after all.
Very well done, I really enjoy your take on all three of them, but I simply adore your take on Fancy in particular. Thank you very much for sharing, I eagerly await more. :3
7548296 Shouldn't be nearly as long this time, since this chapter was originally around twice as long before I decided to move the naughty bits to a new chapter before I ended up with a chapter 12-14k long.
7548323 Heh, take as much time as you feel you need, I'd rather have a very good chapter that I have to wait a few months for, than one you felt rushed to finish, especially given how well you tell your stories.
I'm absolutely loving the character interaction between these three. I've enjoyed every word of this story so far, and expect the chapters to come will be no different.
7548323 And this is good to hear! Take as much time as you need, but to be honest, I feel like I look forward to this story updating more than I do for the main story it branches from.
Them elephants man, always showing up when you least want them around. At least they do tend to meander their way away once you actually acknowledge them. But damn if it wasn't funny how Fancy brought that up, that final line of his about it was great. And I'm not fully sure if Luna was actually misunderstanding or playing up the "naive about modem slang" thing or not.
So, Fleur, you get to the the chasee instead of the chaser tonight. I'd say run but you're going to be out of breath due to something much more fun in a short while anyways.
7549516 Nay, t'was a Master of the Rings for a traveling show from Hindia. A very happy fellow. He performed for Us and the good ponies of Canterlot. We believe his name was Gaja.
7548397 Glad you enjoyed this update, more to come much sooner than this one did. 7550052 Thanks I am having way too much fun with these characters. 7549110 I suppose you'll find out next update. See you around this time next month.
By the delicate curve of a mare's back toward her tail...
By the delicious scent of power responsibly and sensually used...
You have created something wonderful, Steel, and I am grateful to you for sharing it with us Please, if you can find the strength - if my small exhortations here make any difference - continue this tale. I find myself, like Fleur, rather in need.
7561755 I have another 4k written already. They would have been part of this chapter but when I realized how long the mature scenes were going to go I decided I'd rather break here instead of having a 12-15k chapter.
... It should be illegal to be this hot. I... Oh my. Wow. Steel, tu es magnifique.
Very well done, I really enjoy your take on all three of them, but I simply adore your take on Fancy in particular. Thank you very much for sharing, I eagerly await more. :3
7548296 Shouldn't be nearly as long this time, since this chapter was originally around twice as long before I decided to move the naughty bits to a new chapter before I ended up with a chapter 12-14k long.
7548323 Heh, take as much time as you feel you need, I'd rather have a very good chapter that I have to wait a few months for, than one you felt rushed to finish, especially given how well you tell your stories.
Oh my...
This is utterly delicious. I can't wait for Luna to catch her minx. I expect Fancy's endurance and stamina will be tested tonight though...
I'm absolutely loving the character interaction between these three. I've enjoyed every word of this story so far, and expect the chapters to come will be no different.
7548323 And this is good to hear! Take as much time as you need, but to be honest, I feel like I look forward to this story updating more than I do for the main story it branches from.
Them elephants man, always showing up when you least want them around. At least they do tend to meander their way away once you actually acknowledge them.
But damn if it wasn't funny how Fancy brought that up, that final line of his about it was great. And I'm not fully sure if Luna was actually misunderstanding or playing up the "naive about modem slang" thing or not.
So, Fleur, you get to the the chasee instead of the chaser tonight. I'd say run but you're going to be out of breath due to something much more fun in a short while anyways.
Was the elephant Babar, King of the elephants?
7549516 Nay, t'was a Master of the Rings for a traveling show from Hindia. A very happy fellow. He performed for Us and the good ponies of Canterlot. We believe his name was Gaja.
Magnificent. I adore the characterization you put into this, and eagerly await more!
7548397 Glad you enjoyed this update, more to come much sooner than this one did.
7550052 Thanks I am having way too much fun with these characters.
7549110 I suppose you'll find out next update. See you around this time next month.
Commence read.
Another great chapter.
Fancy being quite mindful of the elephant.
Then the hunt is on.
By all the grace of the distant stars....
By the delicate curve of a mare's back toward her tail...
By the delicious scent of power responsibly and sensually used...
You have created something wonderful, Steel, and I am grateful to you for sharing it with us Please, if you can find the strength - if my small exhortations here make any difference - continue this tale. I find myself, like Fleur, rather in need.
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
7561755 I have another 4k written already. They would have been part of this chapter but when I realized how long the mature scenes were going to go I decided I'd rather break here instead of having a 12-15k chapter.
Hm and this one too is the last available...
7571347 Check "I love to see you smile and its sequel. that should keep you busy for a bit XD
7571355 I STARTED with those ^^
7582038 If you're going to wear a skirt, yes. You either go full nude, or you wear the full kit.
7571378 Curse my limited library! Well, New Green chapter in ten days, new Swan chapter should be happening soon after.