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"... Awwwww. Riiiiiiight."
I can't believe you actually did it... xD And it's everything I could have hoped for. Oh man. Wow. Fleur is SO. BUCKING. HOT. Moar!
Commence read.
Doldrums, new word.
Luna, that temptress...luckily Fluer helps resolve that misunderstanding.
Love the banter between them, shall await some more.
I feel like it's a rare thing to find a story so well written that I'd fave on the first chapter, and this is definitely one of those stories. Your voicing and portrayal of all three characters, as well as their dialogue, is stellar. This is also very well-written in general, is intriguing, and it's pretty damned sexy. Seriously, you're downvoters are crazy!
I am now awaiting new chapters with great anticipation.
7006527 I don't worry about downvotes on a mature content story very much. You tend to attract knee jerk reactions instead of real feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.
This is best Fluer.
So much French. I'm not complaining, though.
7007055 Yeah... Fleur is so little seen in the show, and I wanted her to lapse into french every once in a while.
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Point is, I'm a sucker for foreign languages, so even that much drew me in. Kudos.
This is marvelous, only one chapter in and I am already in love with this story.
I don't believe I've seen this combination before. I'm not sure Celestia would approve.
I'm a great fan of Green . So this little tidbit with fleur , fancy, and luna really makes me look forward to future chapters . Now I have to go binge on the last few Green chapters I've yet to finish reading "obsessing over"
~Blessed be ! :TheRandomKitty
7009524 Current chapters are what inspired this back story. My prereaders demanded it.
I quite enjoyed this, and will be looking forward to more.
7009708 are you going to continue working on this?
7019282 I'm already working on a second chapter. I wouldn't have put out the first with no intent to finish it.
I adore the way this is written, so sophisticated and very... French.
A wonderful read so far.
Slow pacing, but it is excellent for a story like this.
Patiently waiting for more
Argh. I MUST comment before I've gotten more than a few paragraphs in: MON coeur. It's masculine! Mon cher, ma cherie (with the accent on the first e that I can't do on this tablet).
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And I've been paying attention to who is addressing whom, too. I'll skype you.
Very nice. Interesting to see this fleshed out.
I am very excited for this story! I love your characterisation of Luna and Fleur so much. A story primarily on them is pretty much guaranteed to be great. I am now eagerly awaiting the next chapter. (Late to read this one as I am.)
Falcon Punches the story.
MOAR!
Commence read.
Ha.
Fancy had some great comebacks.
Seeing the contrasting interactions of Fluer and Luna, after reading Green's last update, was refreshing and insightful.
Oooooooh~
Oh this is a fantastic start!
She seems up for it
can't wait for the moment Luna appears in Fancys dreams to get him "even" with Fleur.
This chapter kept making me think of the likelihood of repeated head trauma resulting in permanent brain damage. Then I remembered cartoon horses are made of marshmallows and cute and they just sort of shake that kind of thing off.
... It should be illegal to be this hot. I... Oh my. Wow. Steel, tu es magnifique.
Very well done, I really enjoy your take on all three of them, but I simply adore your take on Fancy in particular. Thank you very much for sharing, I eagerly await more. :3
7548296 Shouldn't be nearly as long this time, since this chapter was originally around twice as long before I decided to move the naughty bits to a new chapter before I ended up with a chapter 12-14k long.
7548323 Heh, take as much time as you feel you need, I'd rather have a very good chapter that I have to wait a few months for, than one you felt rushed to finish, especially given how well you tell your stories.
Oh my...
This is utterly delicious. I can't wait for Luna to catch her minx. I expect Fancy's endurance and stamina will be tested tonight though...
I'm absolutely loving the character interaction between these three. I've enjoyed every word of this story so far, and expect the chapters to come will be no different.
7548323 And this is good to hear! Take as much time as you need, but to be honest, I feel like I look forward to this story updating more than I do for the main story it branches from.
Them elephants man, always showing up when you least want them around. At least they do tend to meander their way away once you actually acknowledge them.
But damn if it wasn't funny how Fancy brought that up, that final line of his about it was great. And I'm not fully sure if Luna was actually misunderstanding or playing up the "naive about modem slang" thing or not.
So, Fleur, you get to the the chasee instead of the chaser tonight. I'd say run but you're going to be out of breath due to something much more fun in a short while anyways.
Was the elephant Babar, King of the elephants?
7549516 Nay, t'was a Master of the Rings for a traveling show from Hindia. A very happy fellow. He performed for Us and the good ponies of Canterlot. We believe his name was Gaja.
Magnificent. I adore the characterization you put into this, and eagerly await more!
7548397 Glad you enjoyed this update, more to come much sooner than this one did.
I am having way too much fun with these characters.
I suppose you'll find out next update. See you around this time next month.
7550052 Thanks
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Commence read.
Another great chapter.
Fancy being quite mindful of the elephant.
Then the hunt is on.
By all the grace of the distant stars....
By the delicate curve of a mare's back toward her tail...
By the delicious scent of power responsibly and sensually used...
You have created something wonderful, Steel, and I am grateful to you for sharing it with us
Please, if you can find the strength - if my small exhortations here make any difference - continue this tale. I find myself, like Fleur, rather in need.
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
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I have another 4k written already. They would have been part of this chapter but when I realized how long the mature scenes were going to go I decided I'd rather break here instead of having a 12-15k chapter. 
Hm and this one too is the last available...
7571347 Check "I love to see you smile and its sequel. that should keep you busy for a bit XD
7571355 I STARTED with those ^^
Society ponies wear panties!?!
7582038 If you're going to wear a skirt, yes. You either go full nude, or you wear the full kit.
7571378 Curse my limited library! Well, New Green chapter in ten days, new Swan chapter should be happening soon after.
steamy !
7627026 Yes, I imagine a hot shower would be.
The chapter was very sexy, as well. Worth the wait, as always!