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Not bad.
Next clop suggestion - try to get rainbow dash XD
The cutie mark tag made me grin as well
is he gonna get the crusaders?
“Anytime, darlin‘, I’d best skedaddle and find Rainbow Dash. I’m going to show her some of them moves y’all both showed me today.”
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hey its your biggest fan and i think that this is the best one yet
cant wait for more
You do know a mare's nipples aren't in the same location as a women's, right?
737215 Yeah, I don't think i described it as such, but editing at 1AM may have caused me to overlook something.
I need to stop getting my ideas late at night
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You never actually said where, but the guy has done some things that are physically impossible unless he can suck his own member or the nips were at the chest area.
I feel ya on late-night editing.
737421 Let's just say that Fluttershy isn't only helping bears with the tension in their shoulders, maybe a massage helped him become more limber. Could be helping his flexibility, you never know. But thanks for the heads up, I'll definitely look harder at what my writing implies with anatomy.
Here is a thought though weird it may be. Fluttershy being slightly dominated by the human could be played off of primal desires which may or may not state whether humans had existed in the past ancestry of Equestria and that being somewhat dominant to other mares plays off on another form of pleasure (Reminds me of a bit of a hentai I had watch when I was stationed in Korea [God it was so boring when you don't drink much or at all]).
Turns out Big Mac was watching the whole time.
737767 Nonetheless, it is an intriguing thought. The primal desires contradict what they have seen in their society. (Mares being dominated in however long ago. Whereas, now, the mares run almost everything.)
And yeah, it does sound like some weird hentai. Kinda glad I wasn't accepted into the US Air Force then.
737873 737951 Glad to see you like it(?)
I actually wrote that down earlier for ideas on how he could get into the stallion group, "Big Mac thanks you for getting Sis out of heat, or at least rutting her to cool her down." Seeing as how I like putting humor in my stories, I had some interesting ideas that could happen if he becomes noticed by the colts and stallions.
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Actually I was in the Army (Chemical Corp to be more precise) but it follows a similar basis (Almost went Air Force if it wasn't that most of the jobs accessible required a college degree except mechanics [I didn't want to be a mechanic but sadly even in the army had to do some mechanics job]).
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enjoyable as alwas keep up the great work. plus i like the humor clops more then the others
I liked chapter 4. I'm getting the feeling I'm reading the wrong story.
I have an idea. Like human males that like to show off their Trophy Spouse (Yes I am saying the human is trophy worthy in Fluttershy's Eyes and probably in other views) and Fluttershy could drag him around Ponyville to show him off while giving him a proper tour of the place. Knowing Rarity and Rainbow Dash Gossip would be spread far and wide in town before hand and plenty of pent up mares would like to have a little special time with him (Fluttershy pimping him out somewhat [Fluttershy in pimp clothe oh god what have I done]). Knowing you want to bring Vinyl and Octavia into it but knowing somewhat that Fluttershy don't go clubbing you could say Dash Borrows him after Applejack has her talk with her.
Another thing based on how I have been reading this the story "Xenophillia" (If I spelled this right) on this site could cover some areas you didn't think of (Kinda like bouncing ideas off of [The Herd concept might work with Fluttershy as being Head Leader of this Herd]).
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she shouldn't let him wear clothes
Alright, five predictions is all you get. I'll be starting a new story that takes peoples stories that make me rage to a point of killing off their characters mentally, and I wish to your blessing to use your story in the first chapter. I will give you credit for the chapters Idea, along with a link to your story in the chapter. But as always, INSERT MOUSTACHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Now it's better for the guy.
“Anytime, darlin‘, I’d best skedaddle and find Rainbow Dash. I’m going to show her some of them moves y’all both showed me today.”
the only thing that bothered me is the darlin'. i mean wouldn't she have said her trade mark word sugarcube?
but other then that awesome chapter.
I like this bittersweet story
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