Liked and faved!

Looking forward to more.

Loved it and can't wait for more. Is the fic hidden though, because I can't find it from browsing or searching.

720717Yes, it is hidden because of the Mature rating, just make sure to check the box allowing you to see Mature material and you'll be able to find it.

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I do. I can see other adult stories, just not yours. I only got here originally from the link on clopfic. Your story page shows nothing either.

720911 Ah, I didnt submit this, thats why. Now just gotta await for approval.
Sorry, still new to this site and how it works

I've liked it, faved it, now I gotta read it! XD Like a sir!

i really enjoyed this story can wait for more of this crazy adventure

Cheerily. "Cheerilee".

That is all. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png

It seems to be a counter world compared to the original.
Fluttershy more aggressive.
Applejack acting more sophisticated.
Rarity being the truly dirty one.
Rainbow Dash being the Sensitive one.
Twilight Sparkle being more impulsive.
Pinkie Pie will (should make her the more helpful one seeing the opposite would be killing everyone).

this is a GREAT story and i say it is the best i have ever read
BUT i want you to tell me if he is realy in a dream or not because that would SUCK!but i dont think he is but i just want to be sure

722906 Thanks, I wrote these, and edited them, at 1:30AM so there was bound to be something

723275 No worries mate. I enjoy this. I guess it's because I like to see what the fans can manipulate. :3

723180 No, he's not dreaming, he only thinks so because going from a life that's been nothing but getting worse and worse, doing nothing at all, to all of a sudden being the center of attention to a certain pegasus is a little hard to adjust to, especially under these circumstances.

723543OH THANK GOD p.s. im loveing the story so far
and i think you started the calling him the pet thing because you cant put a name for a character if your putting them in the perspective of second person

your faithful reader pooch56

see the refrance i used there ^_^

723631 I did see what you did there
That's a good reason to call him pet, but actually, I originally planned second person, to create a sense of immersion, but Fluttershy uses Pet, so I don't create awkward conversation when he doesn't have a name. And I thought of "Pet" because that was a pet name that was used to call me by, uh, women...

723869 You're right, it is. These are written late at night, so I have sleepy mistakes scattered. Proofreading at 1AM doesn't help get everything. Thanks

723849heh women anyway im a big fan and i cant wait for more

723849oh my gosh i didnt even notice that

i dont think your writing couldnt get any better ITS AMAZING

YOUR BIGGEST FAN pooch56

I don't understand. Honestly, If I were in this guys situation, I would have gotten violent as soon as she put the collar on me.

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Liked and following.

Re-Chapter 2: Not committing suicide, but instead sexing an alien horse on the threat of blue balls.
Chapter 3: Realization that I'm being brainwashed and need to do the exact opposite of what she says.

She got them off in ten seconds flat. nice

724757some people secretly want to be submissive.

Again, I like the story.
I like that you don't have any of those darn "confessions" or "rejections" or "freakouts" that most stories of this kind tend to have.
Unfortunately, they exist for a reason, and although I'm never comfortable reading through the denials and arguments that precede a relationship step of this magnitude, they need to be there for a story to make sense.
No human who is undrugged agrees to sexual relations with a pony after knowing of their existence for two days.
That said, I like that I didn't have to wade through all of that, and my earlier comment still applies. Will continue to read.

I would just PUNCH HER IN THE FACE, I mean, COME ON!!!! This guy! Just... this GUY!!! COME ON!!!!!!

Okay, Fluttershy is much more believable in this chapter. The sudden assault (?) I can mostly believe is a result of her not having a good grasp of social norms, getting most of her info from his body language (as she would with animals), and just being damn thirsty. If the protagonist weren't so worried about being punished, I'd expect next chapter would be him explaining that explicit consent is important in any sexual relationship (maybe setting up a safe word? [maybe one of her friends could bring that up]).