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well got to say, I love the medical staff, and hope to see the gangster mare get her upcoming. also that other doctor yet to be seen, Cristal Harmonic, something about her gives me the Chills.
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Another good chapter! I just can't help but to wonder how things could possibly get worse for poor Night/Bombay.
It will be interesting to see what happens with Miss Tapit!
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
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Yeah! I had a lot of fun thinking up everything in the chapter. Then again, I have lots of fun thinking up all the places I go in my stories.
Now, as for what the green goop is... the world may never know. No, actually, it's a sort of decontamination chemical being tested and stored inside the facility, which is why it cleans so well and is everywhere. I'd originally planned on having it be a bit more featured in the chapter, but it didn't make the cut, as it didn't add much. But it does add weirdness to the whole place!
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The green goop added just the right amount of weirdness to the atmosphere of this chapter. It was a nice touch.
.... Now to try to savor the next chapter over a few days instead of binging on it...
Bombay! What have you gotten yourself into now?!?! Ahhh!! This is more tense than finding out that, in the new survival mode, the only way to side with the Minutemen after accidentally completing a certain Institute mission is to start randomly slaughtering Institute people in their home base!
Does Jean actually know that Bombay is a stallion, or is she making assumptions based on his butch manecut and scars, despite his very feminine appearance?
Also, I hope everyone makes it out in one piece.
Tapit's first mistake was thinking Night was a mare. Her second? Underestimating him.
But I see a problem with this plan. How is she going to get Hispano and Happy out if they're both knocked out too?