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Gamma Deekay


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A good start to your story, I like the way you show the normal life of an enclave citizen before the clouds were lifted. I do have a problem with how the description of your story kind of sounds too slimier to other enclave stories, but this one does try to make itself by makinf=g it's character a normal citizen and a teenage at that so I will continue reading.

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Thanks for taking a look at it! Yeah, it does feel a bit like other 'Enclave in the wastes' fics, but I wanted it too right off the bat. From there, it's going to be a diverse and interesting adventure though, so I hope you enjoy it! :heart::pinkiehappy:

And so begins a new tale. The characters introduced are both memorable, and plenty. Night Flight has his positives and negatives, which will be nice as we see him grow. I'm exited to see who the core cast will be, but so far so fun.

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

I cant wait to read more of this, also i dont know if "Rosie" was a bioshock reference or not, either way a great start to a hopefully great story.

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Rosie was not a bioshock reference, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I do have Bioshock references around in my other stories, and I do have plans to have some in here! I love sticking references into my stories, though they've gotten a bit more subtle than when I started writing three years ago...

6854524 oh well. Im glad you are still writing. It was realy funny imagining a big daddy fighting a foal.

well that's three story's that the Seaddler is in now. That plane gets around.

good chapter, and cant help but like Hispano more, though I thought she was about to molest him... Poor Bombay.

Sooo.... Yaks are the worst, serous.

two things, Love the Empty Quiver nod, the Tank Ghouls realy get around. Also, Fort Mac sound like it will be fun, Love to see here the story goes from here.

Iron guts are awesome but I have a tungsten tongue as well. Great for making others burn themselves quite terribly on fresh tea because they see me drink it like it's cold.

The pony in your avatar is Night Flight, right?

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The pony on my avatar is not Night Flight, no. It's my oc, a ghoul named Gamma Deekay.

Lesion learned, if your asked to do anything reckless for the group, take it up with the boss first.

three years later, people are still making F.E. side stories. dayum

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Eeyup! Still having a lot of fun with them too! :pinkiehappy:

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Hey there! Be a while since I've seen ya around! :pinkiehappy: And yeah, don't worry, I'm not writing Project Horizons here. It won't be some super secret destiny story or anything like that. Just a pegasus trying to find his place in the post sunshine wastes! Anyway, I'm glad you've picked up the story! I've got tons of work into the next few chapters, so no worries on pressing again! I hope you keep enjoying it, and I look forward to hear your thoughts in the future!

well the next chapter promises to be interesting. As well how diamond dog will respond seeing the oversized snow dog.

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I'm glad you liked the chapter! :pinkiehappy: Having Laika return has been something I've wanted to do for some time as a one-shot story, but found that she actually fits the plot here! Anyway, as always, thanks for reading! There will be more to come in just over a week! :pinkiesmile:

Got to love dem blue Alicorns, they just weave in and out of a Fo:E story so well. The purple ones work well enough as as imposing figures, but sadly the green ones don't seem to work as well. But the blues, always a good time when their around.

Gamma Deekay, I am trying to create a fallout equestria story of my own. do you have any advice you can give me to make it a good read?

I hope this all dose not bight him in the flank, good Karma should be rewarded and all that. Also, don't do drugs, even if you need to take a chill pill.

Yes those missing hours are going to bite him back harder than he expected. Still doubt we'll see channeling sabotage anytime soon.

well that is one way to send a message, soo, dose Night get to keep his pipbuck then?

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Short answer, No he doesn't, mostly because Buck cleaved it in half with his claws. :pinkiecrazy: To be fair, even if it had survived, both Night and Buck have no idea what it really is or what it can do for the user.

7475954 too bad, it be an interesting way to get his own pipbuck, well maybe next time.

well, don't touch the Bramble Wolves, Duly noted.

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I'm glad you're still reading and still enjoying it! :heart:

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I'm glad to hear that! :pinkiehappy: Thanks for sticking with it!

Welp. I should have seen the Marwaii reference coming a mile away. Happy dose seem to emulate the king.

Other then that, Sky Raiders FTW, for a moment there I though the Revers from Fire Flay made their way into your story. And Demanding to have the dress, Bombay, you go girl... Mare... Stallion... You weird gender confused pony.

wait, what? What happened to Bombay??? can't end it here. Grrr, next chapter better be soon.

Just decided to check out this story, I'm liking the intro, it's not overly slow and boring, but it's not so fast paced that you hardly know what's going on. Night also seems pretty cool, I'm liking him so far.

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Well, I'm glad you're giving it a shot! :pinkiehappy: Moreso, I'm happy you've stuck around through my stories! It means a lot to me that you have, and I hope you continue to enjoy them!

Well uh, R.I.P. Salt, was hoping he was gonna be another main character. Though I do like The Captain and the other characters introduced.

Hey! It's Hispano! I finished the latest chapter of Empty Quiver earlier and I just realized that this is the settlement that the one mare, (Pilot of the Seaddler, I can't remember her name off the top of my head) was talking to Static Charge and Night Strike about. Anyways, loving this story already, as with all your other work.

So uh, I don't know what to call him now. Night? Bombay? Anyways, nice chapter!

Energy cannon tank? Noice.

Another great chapter, I feel so bad for Hispano though. :fluttercry: But the little dress scene was great.

Oh no, Delilah said near the start, if an axle or wheel was destroyed, they'd be screwed. Well, things just got much more problematic, and complicated... Great chapter though, looking forward to the next one!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

MRI's, who knew medical magnets could be such trouble.

Well, it's good to know that the Hauler isn't screwed, but Night seems like he's in some trouble... Great chapter, looking forward to more!

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Great chapter! Although, I do have to be a little angry with you for making Violet a traitor. Of all the Hauler ponies, I was starting to like her the most.

However, that notwithstanding, it was a fun read and I can't wait to see how these new twists affect everything!

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Woo! This chapter was awesome! Finally get to know what happened after they got knocked out! Though I'm kinda salty about Violet being a traitor, but I can understand why, she's trying to protect the Hauler Crew. But this was fun to read, insane scientists and spooky labs! A great combination! By the way, does this mean Night will be able to remember what happened down there now?

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