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DONT YOU FUCKING DARE KILL MORE OF HIS FAMILY YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE HE ALREADY LOST ENOUGH
And they can't catch a brake can they, even in victory.
I love your style. The atmosphere, the feelings, the interactions. Loving this story. When a new chapter comes out I always read the previous chapter first to get back into the story, and pick up so much more nuanced information that you have embedded in the dialogue. Right up there at the top of the pile of great stories like MN7 when it comes to conveying character feelings.
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I'm glad you've been enjoying it, and thank you for the kind words! I've been trying to keep things interesting as the story grows closer to nearing the end, and I appreciate the feedback.
Had a feeling something bad was gonna happen. Nothing ever goes to plan that smoothly, especially when Night and his friends are involved. Also, their attack happened rather fast. Solomon is dead just like that? Doubtful; confirm that kill Night. Solomon isn’t truly dead until you are staring into the soulless eyes attached to a room temperature body showing signs of rigor mortis that was once Solomon.
And concerning Jynx. Now that I think about it, Jynx said there was a balance and the pendulum had to swing the other direction. Despite her being a vision for Night’s eyes only, she was able to grab, carry, stow, and use a physical pair of scissors to do Delta in. That was her doing, not some cosmic force. I think she was lying all along about the whole karma pendulum IMO. And if Night can truly destroy her with this hospital machine, I’m pretty sure she’s not going out without a fight.
That victory was on the rather pyrrhic side, if Solomon is even gone. Makes me wonder if Night is going to get a chance to be himself without the Jynx again.
Did you see Solomon's body? I didn't see Solomon's body! Someone needs to show 'The Survivor' some proper horror movies...
It ain't dead until it's bayoneted proper-like!