oh someponys going to develop a drinking problem

also rainbow dash just tell twilight already

God damn first shot is a neck shot. Twi may just be a natural.

I love this.

Mwah~

I found a single typo, but since I'm on a phone I don't want to go through that pain.

Also, nice work.

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Second shot, actually. We weren't told where the first landed, just that there was 'a second hole, just below the neck' of the target.

6864258 First was Mordecai twas a head shot and Just below the neck would still be collar bone which in most people's opinion is good enough to call a neck shot.

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Ah, gotcha. Phrasing was unclear to me, thank you for the clarification.

Oh boy, Rainbow's liking the cider a little too much. Trying to drink away her problems... Anyways, another excellent chapter. Until next time.

yeah, the rubberized delivery system sucks. I prefer the longbow delivery system myself

Yeah Pandora runs on the motto survival of the fittest.All of the native animals are predatory in some way.

On the subject of time on Pandora in this chapter, I find it necessary to mention that, according to Patricia Tannis, a full planet rotation for Pandora is 90 hours

Day 43: Day 43 on Pandora, at least I believe it to be the forty-third day I've been here. The moonlight cycles are difficult to get used to. The planet rotation day is over 90 hours long. ....

-Patricia Tannis, Borderlands, ECHO log nr. 2,