i love it

payback is going to be a bitch when Sombra is though with this Caribou

Dang, this is intense. I can't wait to see how this goes.

This is interesting but I don't think Sombra would join the resistance he has little knowledge of what's going on and considering Rainbow his reputation could be problematic with the resistance.

I hope you have Sombra making experements with the female Caboru. If anything they could be useful spies and tools since their almost everywhere and no one really pays that much attanchion to them or what they say around them. All Sombra needs to do is either buy a female or a few or capture a few who are in the wrong place at the wrong time. Although he may feel somewhat annoyed that the females seem to be more interested in being his harem than his tools and this seems to be a base trait among the female of that species. He would likely have to make some subtle changes to turn them into useful spies then figure out how to no questions asked send them back.

Glad to see the return of this fic. Knowing Sombra I reckon he's going to use his powerful dark magic to counteract the spells of the Caribou, he might even regrow Rainbow's wings as a gesture of trust. If he is so inclined.

I have been waiting. yes.

I can't wait for the murder-death-rape fest to begin!

NYAHAHAHAHA!

I can see in the dialogue between the two, that this will be an interesting partnership. For all his darkness, Sombra admires , almost respects Rainbow here, seeing her not like a slave, like he does with basically everypony, but instead as a warrior whom he would want by his side.

I can't tell yet how this story will play out, especially in regards to Sombra's character development, but I can definitely see these two working well off eachother. Sombra is smart, but he's also ruthless and deadly, while Rainbow isn't as great a tactician or fighter, but she has determination and heart. Together they can be a force to be reckoned with. I'm hoping that should they decide to work together longer, Sombra will eventually regrow her wings (even if he justifies it as healing the would of an ally and giving himself a better fighter to aid in his quest).

If this story decides to take a redemption or reformation arc, I'm really hoping these two stay close.

Sombra leading the resistance? All my fucking yes!
Cant wait for the next chapter and to see if sombra really is that bad or if he will turn good after a good amount of slaughter

Another great chapter good work

"But yeah, that's how the Fall of Equestria happened. "

we don't want to be late. or do you

Capital O.

now a days

nowadays

now taunting a heroin of Equestria

heroine

the warm fire the bodies was worth the stench.

'warm fire as the bodies burned was worth the stench', perhaps?

'using discord to cheat' part

You are talking about the character, so capital D for Discord

gather a lot of other mare's to fight back.

Mares, plural.

Just as I owe you for saving my arce back there.

arse

around a former tyrant, she the fact's he stated where true.

but the facts he stated were true.

And... oh, that's where Discord got to. Nevermind.

Ah. So this was how the Caribou won? Discord with his shenanigans again?

Sad that Rainbow lost her wings. I do have to say though, giving everyone a personality was great to read.

I can feel that most of the dislikes were from people who dislike FoE stories in general because based on the first two chapters this story is very well built! Well done!