A Behemoth in Equestria (cancelled)

by Fanskapet

chapter 17 Enter celestia

"Uhm Twilight how exactly shall we explain all this?" Pinkie asked, as they got closer and closer to the princess waiting at the barn.

"What do you mean?" Twilight raised an eyebrow looking up at her.

"Well with all the chaos and the running and the screaming and the giant purple creature that is so dangerous it actually caused Celestia to bring Equestrias whole army and just tell them he is actually friendly and the whole army is here in vain?" Pinkie said in one go, taking a deep breath before continuing, while getting a weird look from Vilefor.
"Won't she be mad?"

"I-i-i uh n-no she won't be mad for causing the entire army to get here.... will she?" Twilight stuttered, swallowing loudly and looking between Pinkie and Vilefor.

"Well it smells alot of lesson zero here." Pinkie shrugged, (scratching the unconcious Dash behind her ear, making her twitch her legs like a sleeping dog) causing Twilight to do a complete stop and just stare forward towards princess Celestia.

"Mmth?" Vilefor growled, as he felt the chain yank him a bit to the left, snorting as he did a tug causing Twilight to fall forward and loose grip on the chain with an "Eep"

"It's getting loose!!!" Random Equestrian soldier number 2451 shouted, causing panic in the lines as they all begun rushing at Vilefor, who made a very girly scream (even through his muzzle.) and run towards the barn, (dropping both Pinkie and Rainbow Dash, the latter who managed to get caught by Twilight) jumping over a surprised Celestia and roll into the barn, or atleast that's what he would have done if he didn't get caught in a golden aura directly above Celestia.

"Mmbmm?!" He mumbled, looking down at the big white alicorn looking him in the eyes.

"Don't hurt him! he's friendly friendlyyyy!!" Twilight shouted squeezing past the Equestrian legion, who had all stopped in their tracks as they saw the giant purple creature get levitated by their princess.

"Twilight Sparkle my faithfull student, i expect you have a really good reason to not annihilate this beast." Celestia said looking down at her student.

"He is peacefull!! or well he is destructive but he's not evil!" Twilight stopped in front of Celestia, swallowing loudly as she pleaded for Vilefors life, looking back behind her seeing the entire Equestrian legion looking between her Celestia and the giant purple creature levitated above Celestia.
"Maybe we should take this inside the barn."

"Hmm I see what you mean, soldiers at ease do not enter unless either me or Twilight Sparkle calls for you!" Celestia ordered her soldiers who all gave a paniced salute and stood at attention.
"Come Twilight, you have much explaining to do."

"Mmnmnmm!?" Vilefor mumbled looking down at Celestia.

"And you better stop growling or I make short work of you." Celestia narrowed her eyes at him, though it felt pretty much like staring down a volcano for Vilefor.

Author's Note:

here you go man i got stuck like a fuck on this chapter and i got so tired rewriting it (yes i do rewrite and dont go for the first try)

Comments

[Bazing]

I don't re write lol xD

[Fanskapet]

4028494

well true those parts are old as hell before the applejack episode saving spike

and remember in final fantasy they have high as fuck hp but i havent heard anything about having tough hides unless its said in the newer games or the oldest ones

and even a giant can be knocked out with 1 hit
(david vs goliat)

[Fanskapet]

4028520

well true he is weak and all but would you go out full beast and destroy and scare the shit outta everything if it happened to you .........stupid question i think we all would lol

[Bronzer]

4028511

I think of it as, if your hide is easy to penetrate, then it is easy for your organs to be shredded when you are as big a target as a Behemoth. So, I figure HP is more like a mix of durability, how much damage you can take that isn't to something critical,and how well you can fight. After all, I'm pretty sure our characters shuldn't be able to take blows from dragons and just get up like nothing happened. Armor or no.

As for the timberwolf episode not being out when that was written; I hadn't noticed, sorry.

I am enjoyingthis fic. I had started reading it when you first posted it (I think), then lost it amidst my countless open tabs.

Also, I thought the corks on his horns were a nice touch. Though, Big Mac overpowering him is complete bull. Especially when you consider just how thick a behemoth's neck muscles are. When they pulled against each other, the rope should have snapped, anyway. Maybe the beam, too.

[Fanskapet]

4028585

that hp theory is really good i must admit

and big mac pulled a house in an episode
and yes the rope mightve snapped but it held for pulling a house so who knows

[Fanskapet]

4674653 oh sorry thought it was easiest for everyone to know this way will try and remember it next time

[chrismonteith]

no celly, bad celestia