[CHRYSALIS] Chapter 1
Queen Chrysalis
-Chapter 1: Tutorial-
Chrysalis began to regain consciousness. She rubbed her head and let out a groan. She then blinked a couple times to shake away any feeling of grogginess and/or blurriness before standing up. She looked around and, for some reason, wherever she looked was a circle in the center of her vision.
"Where am I?" she asked aloud.
"Ah.you're awake."
"Who's there?" she asked. "I demand you show yourself immediately!"
"Welcome to New Equestria. Go ahead and look around your surroundings."
[Gameplay Tip] Move the Right Stick
"What?!" she exclaimed as test appeared. "What's this?"
"Can't you read?"
"Well, of course I can read! I am a queen, after all!"
"Then what does it say?"
"Gameplay tip." read Chrysalis. "Move the right stick."
"Exactly."
"And what is this right stick you're referring to?"
"Don't worry about it."
"Oh, I will worry about it. As Queen of the Changelings it is my job to know everypony and everything."
"And do you?"
"I KNOW ENOUGH!" snapped Chrysalis.
"Could you please just look around?"
"Fine. But only because I want to."
"Fine with me."
Chrysalis looked around her environment. "Is that good enough for you?"
"Why, yes it is. Now move around so th--"
"Excuse me." interrupted Chrysalis. "Did you just order me to do something?"
"No, I--"
"You do not order a queen about! The queen orders you!" she yelled, pointing at the sky.
"If you want to get back to your kingdom, queeny, move around."
Chrysalis began walking around. "Just wait 'till I get out of here. I'll find you and make you pay."
"Good luck."
"I don't need luck. I have an army. We will take you down. There won't be any place you can hide. There won't be any where you can run to. We will find you and--"
"Yawn."
"What?" asked Chrysalis, shocked. "Did you just--" A mini-map appeared in the top-right corner of her vision. "Ah!"
"That is the mini-map. It shows your location as well as where to go next. Now follow it and retrieve whatever's there."
"Retrieve it?" asked Chrysalis. "I'm not a dog. You can't just expect me to--"
"Do you want to go home to your kingdom?"
Chrysalis let out an annoyed sigh. "Fine."
She began making her way to the location marked on her map.
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Is it me or "I feel sorry for voice for what will happen after adventure to it". And "Awww... He or it is mean to the Queen!".
Seriously though 4th wall breaking might lead to terrible voice injuries. Maybe not in near future, but...
P.S. I want to see it. When Chrysalis gets to voice.
710465
Please explain. Not sure what you mean by the quotes and the "Chrysalis gets to voice" thing.
710480
Quote: Chrysalis began walking around. "Just wait 'till I get out of here. I'll find you and make you pay."
This! Make it happen!
I can't imagine how voice will look, but somehow Chrysalis might just break it. Pleeeeease?
710506
Oh, I see. Perhaps at the VERY end of her story.
710508
Much appreciated
You got a perk!: Bloody Mess.
Description: More the merrier. More blood guarantees a better experience. You spill more blood and gain more experience points (30% More blood and exp).
710522
It would actually make more sense for Kyra but I could try to make it work for Chrysalis... or both.
710538
No, I meant You. You get the perk.
But I like where your train of thought is going
P.S. Sorry for my terrible English.
710547
And I meant your idea of hunting down the voice.
710557
Oh. What if they BOTH get to voice at the same time?
Or more than both of them.
Oops. Maybe this was supposed to go in private?
I get the feeling as if I am littering in comments section. Sorry!
710564
You're not littering. I was thinking of having both Kyra and Chrysalis hunt the narrator down. I'll change the text color to match their magic color (Chrysalis = green / Kyra = red).
I can't wait for somepony to get an achievement and flip out about the random stuff crowing onto their vision.
Particularly somepony like Twilight, who'd probably end up opening up every tab simultaneously, and trying to read it all.