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That's a... lot of expodump. It's all the stuff that happened in previous stories, so I am fine, but... yeah I can't speak to whether this is overwhelming to a new reader.
Who's the other pony?
6924960 well I suppose could have broken it up into two chapters but that would still mean expodumping
Minty I changed it to be a bit more clear.
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Ah yes, Dowser's girlfriend. I forgot she was there.