In a attempt to avoid time being altered Discord has tossed himself out of the peaceful World of Equestria. Now he is in the far far future of Warhammer 40k, and Chaos no matter what is nothing but adaptable.
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Okay, good idea. Not a fan of 40k but always a fan of Discord showing off his stuff. BUT you need an editor. Badly. For instance:
There should be some punctuation after 'shifted'. A comma, or a new sentence, something.
Believe, not belief. For that matter, it's not strictly a rule but it's common form that a person's thoughts are in italics with no apostrophes like this and that any telepathy is 'in italics with apostrophes like this'.
Again, some punctuation after 'warp'. These are just the first three errors I caught, there are quite a few more that makes this quite annoying to read.
6372388 Well I'm going to see If I can get one I'll update the chapters once I do
Another good chapter. I assume that new Primarch is Sombra. It'll be fun to see him meet Discord as he obviously will if Discord keeps up his Inquisitor routine.
The knowledge of what he was had finally set into Umbra. The God-Emperor of Mankind his father the Great Crusade and the Horus Heresy. “So then are there anymore Primarchs out there? Where is my Space Marines?” He asked. The information was a lot to take in.
“We don’t know, most of them are either, dead or turn Traitor, as it stands you are currently the only Primarch that is well…” The Priest wanted to Finish but Umbra stood up.
“Very well then gentlemen I now know what I must do, I will inform the planet of my origins and it will rejoin the Imperium of man as for me I have been missing way too long and it’s time I do my duty in the name of my father, The God-Emperor of Mankind!” The Primarch decreed.
If I was a Primarch, I would not have believed that unless I saw the Emperor himself, alive and well. How else did the other Primarchs fully believe the Emperor? If they were that easy to convince, the other Primarchs, including Holy Sanguinius, praised be his name, would all have fallen to chaos. I just felt like pointing that out
(After finishing the chapter) Damn it Sombrero! HOW ARE YOU STILL ALIVE?!
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Yes it is Sombra, more to the point the Primarch found the horn and unknowingly let Sombra into his mind, as you can guess Sombra Destroyed the Primarch Mind/Soul and replaced it with himself.
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I would think that that was impossible. If it was, then the same would have happened to the other Primarchs. The only ones who did, to my knowledge, was that Abomination Fulgrim, and this was done willingly by the host. The Primarchs have gene engineered protection against this sort of thing. Then again, that mostly accounts to the Denizens of the Warp, and Sombrero (I will persist in calling him that) isn't really one of those guys. So, it could be possible.....
I'll have to look into this. If magic is truly a peice of the Warp, then that means that it's actually impossible to do such a thing. You would need the Full Might of a Chaos God to do so.
If not, well, your idea could be entirely possible.
6373008 in chapter one Discord pointed out the warp isn't Magic (well his kinda anyway psionic energy of the warp is magical in the setting). In the second Chapter AN at the bottom I let it known he doesn't need the warp as his magic is not tired to it. Same can be said for any being from his reality.
6373076 true, true.
But, it should still be beyond Sombrero's power to do anything even slightly close to that. It took the FUCKING EMPEROR to kill Horus's soul. A soul of a Primarch is hard to kill. Perhaps, he merely erased his memories and personality, and replaced it with his own, thus making a 'copy' of Sombrero's soul. A much more believable feat for mr. Smokey
6373112 Perhaps... However to be fair I'm using the comics for help. Sombra isn't a unicorn he is something called a Umbrun which is actually a monster born of hate and dark magic... As for how it wasn't immediately, it was gradual. Sombra slowly eroded away the Primarch while replacing him with himself... It's more believable right?
6373112 there is also two other entities who go caught up as well. If you want to help I can PM you what I had planned for them
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Due to that, there's a chance that Sombrero missed a spot. There could still be a small portion of the Primarchs soul still inside. Unless it's the Emperor, or the dark gods, it should be impossible to fully remove a soul from its body. The soul is what binds a lifeforms presence to both the Material and Immeterial realms in the same location. Surely the soul is impossible to fully remove, lest the presence in both realms becomes seperate and...... oh, now that's clever.
I've got it. He didn't delete the Primarchs soul. Well, technically, he did, but I mean his presence in the Material realm was removed. His 'Soul', the Immaterial presence, would still be there, but seperated.
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Well, perhapz. I will consider it. However, as of right now, I have my own stories to write, and also I do love suprises. These are my reasons to considering it.
6373178 Why yes, Sombra removed the remnant of the soul and tossed it into the warp perhaps. This will show up?
6373193 k then just want some feed back personally on them
more plz
6464280 I'll have the next chapter out soon just need to figure out which way to go
This is getting interesting
I wonder what the Chapter Doctrines for his marines would be. Thinking something along the lines of Imperial Fists or Iron Hands, and maybe Geomancy as a psychic discipline - improving cover save, generating difficult terrain, turning difficult terrain into dangerous and ever more dangerous terrain...
6485655 Oh did you get the whole who really in control right?
6485944 The Primarch is a Sombie, I know - but what keeps Sombra from trying to adapt his knowledge of crystals into a new psychic discpline. Another one of their powers could be improvised repairs i.e. a 5+ Rites of Omnissah for 1 warp charge - with better odds if they invest more charges.
And here comes Pony Voldemort.
Is Sombra impersonating a Primarch or did he take over a real one? If the former, makes sense. If the latter, Primarchs have shrugged off the attempted influence of things capable of destroying entire sectors. Sombra is nowhere near powerful enough for that. From what we've seen in the show, at least. Assuming he didn't become some sort of uber-powerful daemon prince, which is totally possible in 40K.