When the Crystal Empire reappeared, Celestia sent Cadance, Shining Armor, and the Elements of Harmony to reclaim it from Sombra, but what she doesn't realize is that... There are new kings in town.
I have a confession. When I clicked on this. I thought that it was the crystal wolfs and was trying to figure out what the hell was going on. Boy did things go off for me.
6844797 Oh I was thinking it was the one that came before yours so I was thinking it was that and not this one. Yours is easy to fallword. My mine was just trying to figure it out but ended up to late.
6845463 holding idiot ball is when the plot demand characters to be stupid when normally, they would solve the problem in the blink of an eye or having no problem at all with certain situations. I also hate Malevolence Tyrant Celestia...it kinda dampened my reading mood. And the MTC are usually supid, idiot and shitz and usually the target for idiot ball in this kind of story same as with Love butt and Shield butt.
6851896 Everything that happened up until Francis pushing him out of the window was conjured up by Sombra's magic. The moment they set foot into the throne room, Sombra took them over. I'm actually going to explain it the next chapter.
Dominic complied and reached with both hands towards the door. With the palms of his hands on the door he gave a hardy push, and the door creaked open slightly. Johnny stepped in and gestured for Dominic to follow. With Dominic in the room, Johnny pushed the door shut. [ILLUSION BEGINS]
[ILLUSION ENDS] His breathing was heavy and labored, his heart threatened to pound its way out of his chest. He looked around and he was back in the throne room. The ponies in front of him were covered in bruises and cuts, their manes disheveled. Huffing in air as if it were a drug. He looked to his friends, both Johnny and Thomas were stanced in a fighting position., With Johnny holding his shield in one hand and a sword in the other.
What parts of the in-between sections contained any reality?
I do like this test he did:
And stood there. And stood there. All until he felt the familiar sensation that was breathing as air filled his lungs, and exited not a moment later.
Breathing working while your mouth is closed and your nose is sealed? Clever test!
6853111 Sorry but I'm not sure I understand the first question. Are you asking if any parts in between the beginning and the end of the 'illusion' were reality?
6854012 A trance. Sombra had put them in a dream like state, puppeteering their bodies from the outside while they themselves were trapped on the inside. I hope that's a decent answer.
Love this story, glad it updated
That was one Rollercoaster ride.
I fianlly got Payday 2 and i must say that fuck you cloakers!! I hate you coming from the sky with a dragon kick
Now THIS! Is a story to be proud of reading, keep good job and chapters dood.
Well this version was definitely worth the wait, great work.
6844433 I have to agree with you, It is indeed a vary good story.
6844502 As an enemy I agree with you, but as a non-enemy they are the best.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. The excitement train is coming straight for your bedroom and can't be stopped.
Dominic Wins.
FATALITY!
Love the update can't wait for the next.
I have a confession. When I clicked on this. I thought that it was the crystal wolfs and was trying to figure out what the hell was going on. Boy did things go off for me.
Sombra is hot.
6844624
Nope, Chuck testa.
You must've been playing some Mortal Kombat lately haven't you?
Keep on fleshing this good story out man!
6844624 You got this confused with my story? How?
6844797 Oh I was thinking it was the one that came before yours so I was thinking it was that and not this one. Yours is easy to fallword. My mine was just trying to figure it out but ended up to late.
You reap what you sow Sombra
Epic FATALITY
I hope you don't make certain characters hold the idiot balls.
I have seen many did the idiot ball thingy with the Crystal empire take over story.
But, anyway. Fuck yeah. Fatality.
6845387 Idiot ball? Mind explaining...?
6844773 Does Fallout 4 count? I was using unarmed.
6845463 holding idiot ball is when the plot demand characters to be stupid when normally, they would solve the problem in the blink of an eye or having no problem at all with certain situations.
I also hate Malevolence Tyrant Celestia...it kinda dampened my reading mood. And the MTC are usually supid, idiot and shitz and usually the target for idiot ball in this kind of story same as with Love butt and Shield butt.
seems like you really hate sombra
6845718 your telling me but with all the games i have played over my short life so far, it just makes me pause and go wow that's brutal.
What the hell happened?
Can someone explain the order of events in this chapter for me please?
6851896 Everything that happened up until Francis pushing him out of the window was conjured up by Sombra's magic. The moment they set foot into the throne room, Sombra took them over. I'm actually going to explain it the next chapter.
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What parts of the in-between sections contained any reality?
I do like this test he did:
Breathing working while your mouth is closed and your nose is sealed? Clever test!
6853111 Sorry but I'm not sure I understand the first question. Are you asking if any parts in between the beginning and the end of the 'illusion' were reality?
Glad you liked that part though.
6853208
I'm asking if they were in an a comatose trance or if the illusion was overlayed on top of their normal senses.
6854012 A trance. Sombra had put them in a dream like state, puppeteering their bodies from the outside while they themselves were trapped on the inside. I hope that's a decent answer.
Hhehehehehe, fucking awesome workon this man, awesome work well done! :D
BRUTAL!
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