I went to a normal convention with my buddy. I found this table brimming with REALLY cool swag. I decided not to break my bank, and just bought a bat from manga. And now I'm trapped in Equestria. As a game character.
One change I'd like to point out for Rarity. Though she prefers working with cloth, she's been shown to be skilled with other crafting types as well. Like that puppet stage in that one episode with the imagination manifestation. Or when she made all that armor for Rainbow Dash during the Art of the Dress. So, I'd some slight boost to other crafts, though not as potent as the boosts to cloth type crafts.
Doctor Whooves lvl 915 .... i call god-tier Man you made him overpowered. He would win every battle but, does anyone other than Derpy and Ditzy know about this? Really would see him hiding this fact as long no one finds out by themselves. (Skill: observe - *hint*hint*)
6237923 Nope my thinking was, it has a 60% chance out of 100%. Regardless of the stats within the skill itself.
6237924 Colton's NEVER going to be able to see The Doctors level, it's almost certainly always going to be '?? for him regardless of how much he levels up Observe. Other trinkets that enhance perception or or perceptory skills though...
6237877 INT and WIS are part of the same stat tree, being that they are both seen on the front with STR, VIT, DEX and LUK. DEF(Which I DO need to change to 'Defense") is a different, unaligned stat, hence the comma.
6237990 Ah. I'm guessing VIT is physical defense, and DEF is equipment defense.
Regardless, I'll help ya out where I can on these. Glad the idea of having such charts helped ya out for the fic. (Oh, and hope you reply to my PM's soon.)
I wouldn't have Angel as 'evil incarnate'. He's not technically evil. He's just a bastard. But, perhaps a different word than evil. Like devil or bastard or douchebag or something.
6238151 She has several devices inside her hammerspace which could be considered pistols. and rifles. and cannons. Really, who knows what kind of shit she has hidden away?
Biggest thing to say about this 'chapter' is maybe to save future chapters like this until you have something to post them with. I like stats and all but you had me all excited for an actual chapter
6237990 right.. totally forgot about that limit. Hmmm - maybe he is going to ask questions after the point he can see cellestias and lunas lvl but not his?? Could get interesting in a way
If I might make a suggestion on Cadence's class title. Seeing as she's meant to be the alicorn of love, Amoromancer (coming from the word amorous) might be a good fit, though whether you use it or not is your decision
6238167 Copy pasted the stats window for each one so I wouldn't have to write up EVERYTHING over and over and over again. So yeah, I got most everything back to 'normal'. Theres bound to be a few typos.
Rule of thumb, HP is VIT times ten, plus the 'combined' STR and DEX(both of their stats at the lowest times ten. So if STR was 24 and DEX was 52, they both have at least 24. then you times twenty four by ten, and add it to the base HP)
..... I highly disagree with AJ's INT stat. She specializes in management for an entire farm. I can understand her wisdom being low due to her hardheadedness, but she's actually very intelligent. It's just that her intellect is more along the lines of structured thoughts, not creative thoughts like Rarity.
I also disagree on AJ getting angry about her parents being called dead. From the show, there's been many hints that they're dead and that she accepts it. Sad about it, but keeping melancholy memories about them in her heart. HOWEVER, I do agree that with her strong family values that mentioning them in some fashion would adversely effect her.
Hmm.... I'd say that for AJ, INT is high, WIS is slightly above average.... till involved with family in any way, in which case her WIS and DEX lower quite significantly.
6238397 In context of the lore of this story, Big Macintosh's, Appleblooms and Applejacks parents are still alive. They are both Pegasi, and members of the arial squadron The Wonderbolts. They're almost never home, instead having to be on call in Canterlot.
6238470 That doesn't make sense. Even in flashbacks, the Apples are ALL Earth Ponies. And there's a large number of hints of them being dead. Don't get me wrong, the parents were likely amazing when alive, and their kids no doubt admired them immensely. But there's quite a number of facts that point towards them being dead. And as said, ALL of the apple family are earth ponies.
6238477 Mr and Mrs Cake. A parent doesn't HAVE to be the same 'species' of pony to deliver/create(so on, so forth.) a pony of a particular 'species'. Two Earth ponies can give birth to a unicorn or a pegasus.
6238487 I'm not saying it's impossible. But, it doesn't make sense since every. Single. One. of the Apple Family are earth ponies. Besides, where else would they have inheritted their strength from? Having them be pegasus makes no sense. And honestly, having them be such is rather jarring.:\
6238487 Now, admittedly, having their parents enlisted in the guard? THAT makes a lot of sense. But, making them pegasi when everyone else in their family are earth ponies? That does not make sense. Especially since farming is in the blood of earth ponies to begin with. It's likely part of the apple family's personal values for it to be earth pony blood in their veins, so as to keep the farm, and in turn, the family strong... considering just how many earth ponies are in their family and all.
Interesting thought. What if, like the fic I linked you to(which updated since I linked it to you), all their equipment had a limited endurance, with them losing the equipment if it runs out of those points as long as they're in his party. Could be hilarious if suddenly in a battle, a gear ran out of endurance, and suddenly, that part of their outfit vanishes. Talk about embarrassing. XD
Though it's cute to have all those Wis stats on Derpy, wouldn't really make sense. Especially with how she acts. Common sense she clearly lacks. ....intellect, however, is different than wisdom, eh? Now, making her high in that, that would make a lot of hilariously ironic sense.
Hmm... Funny thought. What if Twilight had another factor as Celestia's Student that added to her WIS along with her INT, but have a counterproductive stat called Celestia's Judgment, where her WIS -70% when fearing a judgment from her mentor Princess Celestia.
6238567 Actually, it is. She has 60 points total in her LV1, minus ten from the +5 to STR and VIT. You did however point out a bit of an error in her stats for me. She has a singular extra point, I have no idea where it came from.
Part of the Acolyte's Robe for Twilight is missing part of its stat description.
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How so?
One change I'd like to point out for Rarity. Though she prefers working with cloth, she's been shown to be skilled with other crafting types as well. Like that puppet stage in that one episode with the imagination manifestation. Or when she made all that armor for Rainbow Dash during the Art of the Dress. So, I'd some slight boost to other crafts, though not as potent as the boosts to cloth type crafts.
6237871 It says +5 INT,WIS, +5 DEF.
Basically, you missed the stat boost to WIS.
Sounds about right...
I laughed too hard at this one.
Stare Master should say +60% chance, not just 60%
Doctor Whooves lvl 915 .... i call god-tier
Man you made him overpowered. He would win every battle but, does anyone other than Derpy and Ditzy know about this?
Really would see him hiding this fact as long no one finds out by themselves. (Skill: observe - *hint*hint*)
Say Flutters, if Alex encountered The Gamer, what do you think his stats would be? I'm curious at what you'd think
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Nope my thinking was, it has a 60% chance out of 100%. Regardless of the stats within the skill itself.
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Colton's NEVER going to be able to see The Doctors level, it's almost certainly always going to be '?? for him regardless of how much he levels up Observe. Other trinkets that enhance perception or or perceptory skills though...
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INT and WIS are part of the same stat tree, being that they are both seen on the front with STR, VIT, DEX and LUK. DEF(Which I DO need to change to 'Defense") is a different, unaligned stat, hence the comma.
Um... will there be a character sheet for each Displaced who comes to visit as well? Or will only be shown in the story itself?
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I really have no idea.
Heavy DEX, multiple stat pages, one for each weapon form and so on?
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I will of course, put it in that chapter as well. All that much better to keep track of them and all.
6237990 Ah. I'm guessing VIT is physical defense, and DEF is equipment defense.
Regardless, I'll help ya out where I can on these. Glad the idea of having such charts helped ya out for the fic. (Oh, and hope you reply to my PM's soon.)
6238006 id imagine differing stats or skills for every weapon. And his base stats would be heavy somewhere between str dex and vit
The stats chapter was interesting. Hope to see more of the guy' adventures in the newer chapter.
I don't know enough about the Doctor to determine if he is under or over powered. I'm leaning towards the latter.
So awesome. Are you going to be updating this as you go?
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Indeed. Changing, tweaking as I find out certain things don't work or that other things work better, so on and so forth.
I wouldn't have Angel as 'evil incarnate'. He's not technically evil. He's just a bastard. But, perhaps a different word than evil. Like devil or bastard or douchebag or something.
6238089 Excellent.
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It's just his 'class title'.
And it's a joke.
6238117 Ah. Okay.^^
I thought Pinkie would be a pistoleer like moogles in ff tactics.
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She has several devices inside her hammerspace which could be considered pistols. and rifles. and cannons.
Really, who knows what kind of shit she has hidden away?
Twist <Confectioner>
HP:900
MP:370
-LV01|LV04
seems off unless their's an associated buff?
Biggest thing to say about this 'chapter' is maybe to save future chapters like this until you have something to post them with. I like stats and all but you had me all excited for an actual chapter
6237990 right.. totally forgot about that limit. Hmmm - maybe he is going to ask questions after the point he can see cellestias and lunas lvl but not his?? Could get interesting in a way
If I might make a suggestion on Cadence's class title. Seeing as she's meant to be the alicorn of love, Amoromancer (coming from the word amorous) might be a good fit, though whether you use it or not is your decision
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Copy pasted the stats window for each one so I wouldn't have to write up EVERYTHING over and over and over again. So yeah, I got most everything back to 'normal'. Theres bound to be a few typos.
Rule of thumb, HP is VIT times ten, plus the 'combined' STR and DEX(both of their stats at the lowest times ten. So if STR was 24 and DEX was 52, they both have at least 24. then you times twenty four by ten, and add it to the base HP)
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Don't worry, I have a chapter 90% done, 5217 words.
Should be ready in the next few days. A week at the most.
..... I highly disagree with AJ's INT stat. She specializes in management for an entire farm. I can understand her wisdom being low due to her hardheadedness, but she's actually very intelligent. It's just that her intellect is more along the lines of structured thoughts, not creative thoughts like Rarity.
I also disagree on AJ getting angry about her parents being called dead. From the show, there's been many hints that they're dead and that she accepts it. Sad about it, but keeping melancholy memories about them in her heart. HOWEVER, I do agree that with her strong family values that mentioning them in some fashion would adversely effect her.
Bloomberg Apple? Hope that's like a great grandpa or something. Cause naming a tree after her dad is creepy.
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Woot! Good to hear!
Hmm.... I'd say that for AJ, INT is high, WIS is slightly above average.... till involved with family in any way, in which case her WIS and DEX lower quite significantly.
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In context of the lore of this story, Big Macintosh's, Appleblooms and Applejacks parents are still alive. They are both Pegasi, and members of the arial squadron The Wonderbolts. They're almost never home, instead having to be on call in Canterlot.
6238470 That doesn't make sense. Even in flashbacks, the Apples are ALL Earth Ponies. And there's a large number of hints of them being dead. Don't get me wrong, the parents were likely amazing when alive, and their kids no doubt admired them immensely. But there's quite a number of facts that point towards them being dead. And as said, ALL of the apple family are earth ponies.
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Mr and Mrs Cake. A parent doesn't HAVE to be the same 'species' of pony to deliver/create(so on, so forth.) a pony of a particular 'species'. Two Earth ponies can give birth to a unicorn or a pegasus.
6238487 I'm not saying it's impossible. But, it doesn't make sense since every. Single. One. of the Apple Family are earth ponies. Besides, where else would they have inheritted their strength from? Having them be pegasus makes no sense. And honestly, having them be such is rather jarring.:\
6238487 Now, admittedly, having their parents enlisted in the guard? THAT makes a lot of sense. But, making them pegasi when everyone else in their family are earth ponies? That does not make sense. Especially since farming is in the blood of earth ponies to begin with. It's likely part of the apple family's personal values for it to be earth pony blood in their veins, so as to keep the farm, and in turn, the family strong... considering just how many earth ponies are in their family and all.
For Sweetie Belle, her first few abilities like Nimble Fingers gives a +15% ...but doesn't say what that percentage is for.
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http://evil-dec0y.deviantart.com/art/Apple-Bolts-360685641
Interesting thought. What if, like the fic I linked you to(which updated since I linked it to you), all their equipment had a limited endurance, with them losing the equipment if it runs out of those points as long as they're in his party. Could be hilarious if suddenly in a battle, a gear ran out of endurance, and suddenly, that part of their outfit vanishes. Talk about embarrassing. XD
6238550 Funny, though that's clearly a joke comic. XD
Apple Bloom's Earth Pony status is supposed to also give a boost to her vitality, but it seems that's not shown in her stats.
If Apple Bloom's boots are blessed against blight, shouldn't they have some sort of damage reduction against such as part of their stats?
Though it's cute to have all those Wis stats on Derpy, wouldn't really make sense. Especially with how she acts. Common sense she clearly lacks. ....intellect, however, is different than wisdom, eh? Now, making her high in that, that would make a lot of hilariously ironic sense.
Hmm... Funny thought. What if Twilight had another factor as Celestia's Student that added to her WIS along with her INT, but have a counterproductive stat called Celestia's Judgment, where her WIS -70% when fearing a judgment from her mentor Princess Celestia.
6238567 Actually, it is. She has 60 points total in her LV1, minus ten from the +5 to STR and VIT.
You did however point out a bit of an error in her stats for me. She has a singular extra point, I have no idea where it came from.