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Well that escalated quickly.
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Well, like I said, this chapter was a bit rushed, but it get's a bit better after the beginning of Chapter 5, which everyone will sadly have to wait for to come next week.
6133622 Your rushed jobs seem to work well for you. This creates the perfect setting for a climax scene.
Great chapter but please don't kill of celestia please don't .
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Well, sadly and sorry for saying this, but your gonna have to wait till Monday to figure out how Twilight and Celestia get out of this situation.
But let's just say....things get a bit better after the beginning of Chapter 5. ;)
Ok . And thanks for calming my nerves alittle.
Bored, not board.
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I can admit the fact that some words and stuff aren't really spelled right or edited well but, like I said, this is the first ever romance I have ever done fully and the first fanfic I've written in about 5 or 6 years. I've been practicing my writing skills writing up creepypastas, but I can admit that I have made errors. Besides, I'm taking a break from writing this for the weekend, mostly because the most recent chapter took a lot out of me. I'll probably go back and fix my errors over the weekend.
Thanks dude BTW for bringing it up, it's the kind of constructive criticism I'm looking for.
- Maxman103095
I think you overdid it a little.
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Don't worry, thing's get a whole lot lighter after the tail beginning of Chapter 5, but you'll have to wait 'till Monday to find out how they all get out of this situation.
6140479 Let me guess, Celestia was trolling again.
6140485
Um, that letter she sent Twilight didn't sound like, "lol, i'm trolling you! <X)"
Being serious, I wish I could tell you what happens in Chapter 5, but I don't like spoiling stuff. I'm sorry dude.
6140965 Belief me, I have seen LOTS of trolling on serious stuff.
Noooooooooo twilight must save her please update
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Well, you and everyone else is in luck. Tomorrow, I will put up Chapter 5. Sadly though, I can't tell you what happens in it, but lets just say, things are gonna get good!