Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
Page generated in 0.037 seconds
Total duration
987 users online
174,192 hits today, 2,378,215 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
This deserves so much more attention than it's gotten. ;-;
You're still the best author on the site btw.
Also it's about time somebody drew arts of Fine Crime. He's really grown from a gary-stu into a real character over time.
Okay this is getting even more interesting considering what we know about the Alicorn Amulet in "Trixie V.S Equestria" I wonder how Celestia will play her hoof into this and her motives of given to the said owner of the Amulet in that story.
8256714
Fun fact: Order of Shadows was my second worst rated story back when I stopped keeping track of that kind of thing. The first chapter seems to have scared a lot of people off. The Caballeron Intermission is likely to do something similar.
And stop trying to make me blush.
Fine was always a real character, he just didn't get the right kind of introduction to show that.
8257189
Honestly, this is the part of Caballeron's story I've been dying to get to.