Everything's working out, bit by bit. It's not the American I was born into, but it's working..."

Delete that wayward 'n'.

It's lonely, but it's for the best. Everything's working out, bit by bit. It's not the American I was born into, but it's working..."
America
or American life

They are sneaking through.

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6343393 Typo double fixed!

I don't see this happy state of affairs lasting for too long. Between Leo's warnings and noblesse oblige, Will's probably going to need to play the hero again soon. Perhaps very soon, depending on what's going on in the inscrutable East.

6343580 Yeah, I personally don't see any members of the herd being particularly happy with sitting on the sidelines for long. Something's going to happen, and they are going to get involved.

The room's listed

6343806 *re-reads* ah i see, context be a bitch. A misleading bitch if the wording fits.

I didn't Realize Dust was part dog.

She noticed out approach

hair but on her pretty

The Covert Typos have arrived Silver

Not so sure about that But...

6345328 Fixes applied!

The space she choose already had someone in it. Fortunately, they didn't explode as I thought might happen, instead Crystal's form seemed shunted just to the side and she looked dizzy a moment.

While I don't agree with how you fixed that little issue, I won't make a big deal about it.

Also;
typo. (Bolded, word Underlined)
Weird phrasing (Bolded, Italicised)

hum a new twist in the story.
I am liking this all that much more retired yes but now we can delve in to family life all that much more.
but on the other hoof I am seeing something here. nooppp not giving out spoilers.
Harts Fire

6345980 Typos teleported into the void of space. What didn't you like?

6344242 not really related comment, but... Like a true Krogan he now has a quad.

As for the chapter, last scene was cute.