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Not as shocking as I expected, but we haven't heard the whole story... So I'ma wait for more of the shocking part of Hopes past, without typos hopefully or sadness.
Several places in the story where the writing feels, off? I might have to come back to it later when I have more time to give a better analysis.
6321634 You know, it won't necessarily be something shocking. He can just have been a random guy/girl with a few anecdotes like the killed boyfriend one.
I think you meant "He probably died of thirst".
This mysterious typo need to die.
6321677 The mysterious typo died under unspecified circumstances.
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The policemen undertaking the investigation are refusing to detail the crime zone, specifing it only as "quite colorful". Further investigation into the typos family were unsuccessful, for the typo was so mysterious to the point of unrecognizion.
Neon is such a magnificent troll, teach me senpai!
I've been thinking, what if Dusk Hope is more pattern than human? Cindy and Karen, they co-existed with their hosts when they were brought to Earth, but what if a pattern didn't feel like co-existing? It might have simply been too naive at the time to understand what it was doing, but what if Dusk's resident spectra just took control and sort of became him? It might explain why his mind was so tangled up, and he feels like a feral. The spectra spread through his brain and smothered the old mind until it was in charge. Now Dusk has to deal with the old life's memories, or perhaps a new voice in his head. Perhaps they'll finally want to use that body-splitting technique in order to give the original human a body, and Dusk will be a pure spectra.
Just an idea, first thing that came to mind when I was considering why Dusk's mind is so tangled.
Shouldn't humans be able to infect themselves by simply forcing themselves on a pony? Like, that soldier could have jumped up and kissed Cindy or William and he would've been infected. Not saying that he would've done that, but he could have, couldn't he?
6322922 Did they strike you as an absolutely certain person that had reached that point? I mean, in theory, sure, all they'd have to do is pucker up. William and Sandra are the first infectious ponies in the bunker in quite a while, from the way they're talking. How is New York cleaning up anyway? Still a mystery.
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What?
6323017 Did they seem brave enough to take that leap, both in assaulting Will/Cindy and infecting themselves with a wildly variable disease?
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Like I said, I'm not saying they would've done that, I was just asking if they could've.
6323077 So far as they know, they're just as viral as any other feral, just better able to act about it, and afterwards. If you were going to be infected, being so by a princess level that knows how to control it? Probably the best candidate.
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Yeh.
I am so hoping that Dusk Hope's life was not hearable he is just to nice of a stallion to have that kind of pane to remember.
6332326 The typos. Pls stop.
ch91
'away' i think?