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Wow, ok, I love how you gave the Sirens some mercy here and the breakdown for Alex was well done and explained. Uh, would he get Xion’s Final Form armor? That stuff was op in its own right.
lol Nice overall chapter.^^ And nice short crossover. I much prefer displaced crossovers when they have a purpose. Though, I also prefer it when both sides get something out of the meeting. But, ah well. Maybe next time.
Nice chapter. Way to go with that part about the issue Alex is dealing with. At first I was gonna skip over it because I had to deal with it somewhat when my goddaughter started hers, (I was her only friend who wasn't related by blood to her and let's just say I'm happy she feels that she can talk to me like that but I hope she doesn't) but when I saw that Sarah girl I was like 'where the Tartarus did she come from' so I read the whole thing. Good news: No flashbacks! Lol
But seriously you did a good job getting the idea across without actually getting the idea across, if you catch my meaning. Not an image anypony should be subject to. Some stories seem to feel that the reader must know absolutely everything the MC is going through; and there're just some things that we really don't.