A young colt has aspirations of heroism, but swiftly learns that such a dream may not be realistic within the confines of the Marejave Wasteland. Can he overcome the world's callousness, or will he fall prey to it like so many before him?
What is this? A chapter for ants! How can we expect readers to enjoy this, if they can't even... okay don't know how to continue that joke, but you get my point. Be glad that there was 2 shortish chapters to satisfy my hunger or you would have heard more complaining!
So as a locksmith that works with screws and other such most of my day will I say that I am satisfied to deem Best Pony a few screws loose, but it is nice to see what a giant herd he have gathered to keep him company down there with all those books!
And FIRST of course!
Nitpick "In the shadows lie a large" well yea Koe does lie a lot from the shadows, but in this case was the hidden figure "laid" there
What is this? A chapter for ants! How can we expect readers to enjoy this, if they can't even... okay don't know how to continue that joke, but you get my point. Be glad that there was 2 shortish chapters to satisfy my hunger or you would have heard more complaining!
So as a locksmith that works with screws and other such most of my day will I say that I am satisfied to deem Best Pony a few screws loose, but it is nice to see what a giant herd he have gathered to keep him company down there with all those books!
And FIRST of course!
Nitpick
"In the shadows lie a large" well yea Koe does lie a lot from the shadows, but in this case was the hidden figure "laid" there