A young colt has aspirations of heroism, but swiftly learns that such a dream may not be realistic within the confines of the Marejave Wasteland. Can he overcome the world's callousness, or will he fall prey to it like so many before him?
First of all... FIRST! A bad habit I know, but I do so enjoy setting my mark on good stories.
So a content warning... after that last chapter... Well time to buckle up and hold on to hats and glasses because this is gonna be a wild ride! And what a while ride it was. I have mentioned PH before, and where PH failed by drawing the scene out in an attempt to make the reader even more uncomfortable must I say that this scenes shortness makes it so much more... well effective. I sighed and groaned at Blackjack because she put herself into the situation and she was so bo-hoooo about it afterwards... Best Pony Ever... Best Pony Ever act as a more believable a rape victim. There are a scene in GoT where two chars talk about how one saved a whore from being raped, and ended up in her bed as thanks, but as he later reflected on was it all fake, the last thing on a rape victims mind would be sex, and for Best Pony Ever is even the mere touch of another too much for him to handle. I do honestly not know what I should feel or think about all of this, but one thing can I say, this feels so spot on where PH felt overplayed.
"It’s time to get up. Come on now, don’t make me have to start singing"
Each time that I am on vacation with my father in law does he make those threats at my girlfriend and I... I know the fear of the overly false morning songs
Quite the ride, and quite the introduction on Best Voice in Head ever!
Nitpick: " But over ever since I’ve been trapped down here" delete
First of all... FIRST! A bad habit I know, but I do so enjoy setting my mark on good stories.
So a content warning... after that last chapter... Well time to buckle up and hold on to hats and glasses because this is gonna be a wild ride!
And what a while ride it was. I have mentioned PH before, and where PH failed by drawing the scene out in an attempt to make the reader even more uncomfortable must I say that this scenes shortness makes it so much more... well effective. I sighed and groaned at Blackjack because she put herself into the situation and she was so bo-hoooo about it afterwards... Best Pony Ever... Best Pony Ever act as a more believable a rape victim. There are a scene in GoT where two chars talk about how one saved a whore from being raped, and ended up in her bed as thanks, but as he later reflected on was it all fake, the last thing on a rape victims mind would be sex, and for Best Pony Ever is even the mere touch of another too much for him to handle. I do honestly not know what I should feel or think about all of this, but one thing can I say, this feels so spot on where PH felt overplayed.
Each time that I am on vacation with my father in law does he make those threats at my girlfriend and I... I know the fear of the overly false morning songs
Quite the ride, and quite the introduction on Best Voice in Head ever!
Nitpick:
" But over ever since I’ve been trapped down here" delete