A young colt has aspirations of heroism, but swiftly learns that such a dream may not be realistic within the confines of the Marejave Wasteland. Can he overcome the world's callousness, or will he fall prey to it like so many before him?
"“Fratricide does tend to strain the concept of brotherly love"
And I felt that I was nitpicky and here he goes and say a sentence like that! I mean a bit of fratricide is always on a brothers mind, especially when the other sibling is a pain in the butt, in this case quite literary, pun not intended.
So that purpose with this giant library… I can't go into too much details because spoilers, but Scootaloo really fucked this one up. They already have an answer to the question that they are trying to ask.
Nitpick: "a look of concern passing over his face and an unusual amount worry in his tone" ACID ATTACK!
especially when the other sibling is a pain in the butt, in this case quite literary
I feel like I shouldn't have laughed at this... but I did. Am I a bad person?
As far as the library goes, it's a historical story that I like (although in the real world it went a little differently) and I guess I think that there's a difference between knowing an event happened, and having advanced scientific monitoring equipment gathering real time data to see it all unfold. I also wanted to write an experiment, but the FoE-verse actually tries to make helpful Stables, instead of ones that just fuck with people like traditional Fallout.
Aye dude, finally found the time to get back into the flow, even though some details still escape me. Well, no matter, this story is so awesome that I don't mind reading it again. First chapter, here I go again! XD
And frankly, the purpose of this Eraser Program, given the example/ context given fo the experiment, is not that difficult to guess (I think), even though I still have *some* doubts about my theory. Well, let's see if I'm right in the next chapter, eh? ^^
P.S. : glad you're back though dude, you're awesome for not having given up on the story! Really, a whole lotta thanks to you for that.
9504257 Enjoy the re-read! I speak from experience when I say that I know it's a bit of a gauntlet. I'm trying to have the next one out a bit more timely.
Yeah, the gist of what's going to happen is probably pretty obvious, but hopefully, the method with which it happens is a bit less so.
And thank you, the encouragement always helps me stay motivated.
9854666 Many thanks, friend. I'm glad you got a chance to check it out. I'm definitely still working on this story, though I do have a poor habit of letting some roadblocks derail me for longer than I'd like. But I'm still here and still working on it.
And I felt that I was nitpicky and here he goes and say a sentence like that! I mean a bit of fratricide is always on a brothers mind, especially when the other sibling is a pain in the butt, in this case quite literary, pun not intended.
So that purpose with this giant library… I can't go into too much details because spoilers, but Scootaloo really fucked this one up. They already have an answer to the question that they are trying to ask.
Nitpick:
"a look of concern passing over his face and an unusual amount worry in his tone" ACID ATTACK!
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Also acid is perfect for a solution with an overly alkaline pH balance. (I may have taken that quote from Archer )
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I feel like I shouldn't have laughed at this... but I did. Am I a bad person?
As far as the library goes, it's a historical story that I like (although in the real world it went a little differently) and I guess I think that there's a difference between knowing an event happened, and having advanced scientific monitoring equipment gathering real time data to see it all unfold. I also wanted to write an experiment, but the FoE-verse actually tries to make helpful Stables, instead of ones that just fuck with people like traditional Fallout.
Aye dude, finally found the time to get back into the flow, even though some details still escape me. Well, no matter, this story is so awesome that I don't mind reading it again. First chapter, here I go again! XD
And frankly, the purpose of this Eraser Program, given the example/ context given fo the experiment, is not that difficult to guess (I think), even though I still have *some* doubts about my theory. Well, let's see if I'm right in the next chapter, eh? ^^
P.S. : glad you're back though dude, you're awesome for not having given up on the story! Really, a whole lotta thanks to you for that.
9504257
Enjoy the re-read! I speak from experience when I say that I know it's a bit of a gauntlet. I'm trying to have the next one out a bit more timely.
Yeah, the gist of what's going to happen is probably pretty obvious, but hopefully, the method with which it happens is a bit less so.
And thank you, the encouragement always helps me stay motivated.
9854666
Many thanks, friend. I'm glad you got a chance to check it out. I'm definitely still working on this story, though I do have a poor habit of letting some roadblocks derail me for longer than I'd like. But I'm still here and still working on it.
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