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Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it.
I really hate how empty the last scene feels now that characters have been offed left and right and it feels more like the norm than any special point in the story. Sure it was the most gory thing to happen so far, but honestly is it a bit meh to me, and the feeling of meh makes me wonder if it would be worth it or not to read more as a scene like that, the biggest so far, should at least made me feel something.
By the way, when it comes to music can you easily link to youtube at the right points, Adder1 and a few others have been using that trick to very big succes.
Nitpick:
"rather than pushing it open like a rather pony." Don't think that rather is the right word here.