Life was good, I had fun, I had friends, now not so much. Now I have to deal with losing half of my emotions and memories while figuring out what to do in a world filled with rainbow colored horse people. Oh and i'm a Daedra now, so yeah.
So if you are familiar with the Displaced then you know how this will go, if not let me explain.
...... COMMA AFTER NOT! COOOOMMMMMMAAAAAA AFTER NOOOOOOOOT! LOSING MY MARBLES AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU SCREWED UP A LITTLE AND I'M LOSING MY MARBLES!
All in all, the mistakes that I could see aren't all that bad. Of course with how bad my own skills at writing are, I can't really say how good or bad your abilities are. Looking forward to more of this
First, welcome to the Displaced club.^^ Second, so far, this is an nice story. Let´s see how this will unfold. The princess of love with a very own, personal Daedra soldier. Hmm, oh the possibilities. And third, some cheese anyone?
Well if he wants to serve a prince doesn't shining armor become one when he marries cadance? At least he can stay in character as the guy used to be the head of the guards. In other words shining armor was the guy who ran the millatary over the kingdom just under the princesses in authority. With his sister the personal student of the princess of the sun the two had pretty deep connections. So if the demora knight wants to serve a lord his best bet is shining armor. The guards of equestria do resemble knights so he would fit right in under shining's orders. Plus shining as a former guard is pretty good with tactics and military operations which demora knights do if you played the games. Now mind you I don't play the game as my laptop is not exactly working but I can use my tablet and YouTube to know about this. So this is just what I understand from YouTube.
...... COMMA AFTER NOT! COOOOMMMMMMAAAAAA AFTER NOOOOOOOOT! LOSING MY MARBLES AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU SCREWED UP A LITTLE AND I'M LOSING MY MARBLES!
5792939 AAAAUUUUUGHHHHHHHHH STOOOP SCREAMING IT HURTS MY EYES!!!!
All in all, the mistakes that I could see aren't all that bad. Of course with how bad my own skills at writing are, I can't really say how good or bad your abilities are. Looking forward to more of this
...fuck this shit, I'm done here.
First, welcome to the Displaced club.^^
Second, so far, this is an nice story. Let´s see how this will unfold. The princess of love with a very own, personal Daedra soldier. Hmm, oh the possibilities.
And third, some cheese anyone?
This is really good. keep going please
Hallo ik ben ook Nederlands leuk om een andere Nederlander te... lezen
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Thanks for the pointing that out.
I'll change it right away.
5794636 Welcome.
Well if he wants to serve a prince doesn't shining armor become one when he marries cadance? At least he can stay in character as the guy used to be the head of the guards. In other words shining armor was the guy who ran the millatary over the kingdom just under the princesses in authority. With his sister the personal student of the princess of the sun the two had pretty deep connections. So if the demora knight wants to serve a lord his best bet is shining armor. The guards of equestria do resemble knights so he would fit right in under shining's orders. Plus shining as a former guard is pretty good with tactics and military operations which demora knights do if you played the games. Now mind you I don't play the game as my laptop is not exactly working but I can use my tablet and YouTube to know about this. So this is just what I understand from YouTube.
Good chapter.
Interesting.