• Published 28th Mar 2015
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I serve the lord of... - Lionvalley

Life was good, I had fun, I had friends, now not so much. Now I have to deal with losing half of my emotions and memories while figuring out what to do in a world filled with rainbow colored horse people. Oh and i'm a Daedra now, so yeah.

I serve the lord of... written by Lionvalley
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Domaldo
Domaldo #1 · Mar 28th, 2015 · · ·
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Well, there are a few grammatical mistakes, plus some redundancy in words. But other than that, I'm liking this! Good luck with your story Lionvalley!

Solarkness
Solarkness #2 · Mar 28th, 2015 · · ·
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Interesting...
keep going or I WILL HANG YOU BY YOUR THROAT!
I mean, or I will get sad...

ForgottenBackgroundPony
ForgottenBackgroundPony #3 · Jul 30th, 2016 · · ·
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English is not my native language so there are bound to be a couple of grammar problems.

And yet you know there/ they're/ their better than most English speakers I know... KUDOS!!!

Replace the "dvd and film industry" with "FOR USING THESE WORDS CORRECTLY I MUST SAY..."

deadmemes
deadmemes #4 · Oct 23rd, 2018 · · ·
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...I don't think the wolves would attack one at a time.

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