Why the gods? to me it makes the plot a tad confusing.

5910195 Well why include Cerberus, Tartarus and a character's name is another word for chaos? Just to be clear Chaos is a lesser known Greek God. I have long thought there might be a connection to the Greek mythology in MLP. I thought that Poseidon probably created Earth ponies, Unicorns and Pegasus, he certainly was involved with Earth ponies and Pegasus(Don't ask) but I changed that for obvious reasons. Since Zeus is a dick, he probably created Alicorns to one up his brother and that is in line with his character. Hades is one of mythologies sorest losers, he would hate to have nothing to compete with Zeus or Poseidon's works and the changelings would be perfect for that. To be honest this came about because of a nightmare I had, that's where most of my ideas come from and here's a fun fact I'm a massive fan of Percy Jackson's adventures and the Disney's Hercules film. Any more questions? Feel free to ask.

5910430 True, but I like the concept and I don't mean to offend, but I think you could have introduced the a tad different and got better results. Again, I don't mean to offend, so don't try to kill me. Please.

5910441 No it's cool. I'm restricted by my dreams last time I moved too far away it sucked. Look at Celestia's released lust and you'll see what I mean. In the end introducing Hades this early was a change from the nightmare but I thought including him wouldn't make the next Guest to Pinkie's party such a big WTF. I also want to write a more difficult story and well this makes things easier.

5910466 I understand. I have a story that involves the Greek gods too. My first and only story on here and every one hates it. It has like 25 dislikes with only 10 likes. Nobody will tell me why it sucks. They say it's errors, but my editors say it's fine. I'd like to know how the hell that works.

5910486 Hey I have a test reader and my most unpopular story is his favorite. He test read Chrysalis always wins and said he'd rather have his eyes removed than read a second chapter. Tell you what I'll take a look at your story since I'm a sucker for Greek God stories and if you like you can read whatever you like.

5910514 Sure. That works.

5910526 Allow me to say Thank you for the feedback, that means the world to me and it's the only way I'll improve as a writer. Feedback is worth all the likes I'll ever get and the dislike thing, I'd say ingore it feedback from those people would be worth reading but I never get feedback from people who didn't like it. Your comment was constructive and will help. Thank you.

5910571 No problem.

5932144 Thank you. For the Zecora talking in rhyme, I'm sorry but rhyming is not my talent. As for the slave collar part, I was more focused on giving Twilight a way to defy Chrysalis and if given the choice between keeping the slave collar concitant and letting Twilight defy Chrysalis, my choice is in the chapter but if it helps consider the collar weakens if overused and thus why Chrysalis kept switching slaves. However feedback is always appreciated, may I ask What if the next chapter included Applejack lying about her feelings?

That was weird.

6382649 Well yes but it's also the only line I thought the row man of the river Styx would say. You know what they say "There's nothing new under the sun"