There's a new pony in town and no one knows much about him, but he seems to know more than he should. Twilight and her friends meet this strange new pony but have trouble figuring out whether he's friend or foe...
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Are you guys seeing a double authors note?
Nope
5807753 weird...
5807669 I'm not and I just have to say I don't know why this is getting so may down votes. The only problems I see are the small mistakes that you know about so far I think this is pretty good
OMG I LOVE YOUR WORK KEEP IT UP!!
5807757 indeed
5807209 because James is my name.
5808245 lol, heray for coincidences!
LOL Title reminded me of this song
That boy needs therapy, Psychosomatics!
5809232 It should, that's where the chapter title came from...
ib cant wait for the next chapter
You forgot to capitalize names.
So he is going to mindf*ck everypony... I LOVE IT!
Mindf!ck, I love you Author.
Missed some more capitalization. If I might make a suggestion, if you're writing this in a word document or other such program rather than on the site directly (and if you aren't, do so, you'll thank me when a surprise outage doesn't wipe all your work), when you finish a chapter use the "replace" tool to replace twilight with Twilight, and so on for any proper nouns you think you might've forgotten to capitalize. It's really helpful if you run into frequent capitalization errors like I've noticed.
That said, liking the story so far. On to the next chappy.
Edit: I feel stupid, forgot to check last update date @_@
Oh well