There's a new pony in town and no one knows much about him, but he seems to know more than he should. Twilight and her friends meet this strange new pony but have trouble figuring out whether he's friend or foe...
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5800758 thanks, I made the mistake of not reading the beginner's guide to writing thing that they have on here before writing this out. from the eighth or ninth chapter on, it should be immensely better but till then, it's gonna be more of this... well, provided we can't hook up before I post the next chapter. shouldn't be too hard since I just found out I lost a bunch of edits I had already done that made minor changes to the storyline. So once I fix those, I can send chapters 1-8 over.
I see a great story in the makeing but you have to take your time with stuff like this plan out the story ahead and write with detail and corect grammer some on the site can be good or bad grammer nazis but the biggist things are plan and take your time relese a chapter when you fell its ready
5800839 Thanks I'll keep that in mind
i like your story please continue
hmph.
5806547 hmph?
5806552 hmph.
5806566 Why hmph?
its good to see more chapters on this fic
Oh my god. I have been searching through anime to find things named Sebastian for the last 2 days. Pls someone tell me!
Very very interesting
7313246 Black butler
Genius? Check. Perfect memory? Check. Sudden evil Mastermind laugh? Check. Red eyes? Check? Should I hide the Death Note?
Doe, Ray, Me, Fa, So, La, Tee, Doe
Nope nada no way this is how there spelt
Do, Re, Mi, Fa, Sol, La, Ti, Do
Sorry but being in choir has rammed them into my memory and I feel weird seeing them like that... (Not trying to insult you or anything)
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I was in choir too, lol. Believe it or not, that's all auto correct. I was half asleep when I wrote this chapter.
Like Chiffon Aoi/Fairchild from the Freezing anime?
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Precisely.