There's a new pony in town and no one knows much about him, but he seems to know more than he should. Twilight and her friends meet this strange new pony but have trouble figuring out whether he's friend or foe...
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6173456 thanks, sorry it took so long.
i love it
Absolutely loving the story, keep up the good work!
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thanks, I felt really bad for not putting out a chapter till now, so I spent some extra time trying to get it out.
heard
mane
to the
tail
peeked, mane
who's
Lesson time
"Whose" is possessive, "who's" is a contraction of who is.
you know that guy who's (who is) grey and has a red and black mane? He knows stuff.
you know that guy whose coat is grey and has a red and black mane? He knows stuff.
crowd, breaking
comes
too
There are some more small mistakes but they're easily overlooked and I'm getting bored copy pasting
Just going to straight up attack and capture him? Why?
Paranoia leaf?
True, at worst he could be planning an attack.
But he could be just an over-zealous fan of the ponies that saved the world!
An undercover guard for the elements of harmony!
Hell, even a creepy stalker shouldn't be taken this seriously!
Get a restraining order if you're scared of him, don't fucking beat his ass!
What has he done that was illegal so far?