• Published 1st Mar 2015
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Piercing Eyes - Draco S Brony

There's a new pony in town and no one knows much about him, but he seems to know more than he should. Twilight and her friends meet this strange new pony but have trouble figuring out whether he's friend or foe...

Piercing Eyes written by Draco S Brony
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Comments ( 8 )
thatraptor
thatraptor #1 · Apr 1st, 2015 · · ·
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Your getting better and i aplaud you for it keep up the good work and remember my advice

Draco S Brony
Draco S Brony #2 · Apr 1st, 2015 · · ·
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5807562 Hai, arigatōgozai masutā!:coolphoto:

flufpufhuf
flufpufhuf #3 · Feb 16th, 2016 · · ·
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It reminds me of the adom family
:derpytongue2:

Amethyst Blade
Amethyst Blade #4 · Apr 11th, 2016 · · ·
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Hmmm...I see some improvement in grammar and spelling.Good job.

Amethyst Blade
Amethyst Blade #5 · Apr 11th, 2016 · · ·
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Also, appropriate music.

Frost DemonHeart
Frost DemonHeart #7 · Oct 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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Romeo and Juliet lol:pinkiehappy:
nice chapter, i must read more its just so good!:twilightsmile:

Hero of time
Hero of time #8 · Mar 22nd, 2019 · · ·
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Just then, she stopped and realized something she hadn't before. “How did he know my name?”

Pinke was pinked

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