There's a new pony in town and no one knows much about him, but he seems to know more than he should. Twilight and her friends meet this strange new pony but have trouble figuring out whether he's friend or foe...
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please write more soon
5795100 was actually thinking about it, but I still am really apprehensive about posting it...
don't be I can guarantee it will be amazing
5796985 someone seems confident.
My. You weren't kidding when you say you need an editor. Though there are some thematic choices I'd never write with myself, I could spot at least 3 or 4 things that are off in the first paragraph. I'd be happy to do some editing; I've got my own story I'm working on, but it's almost done. I can begin in earnest at the start of April at the earliest, if you want.
(New to the site, I've been here a whole 4 days if that. But Penned IN has been worked on for ≈10.5 months by this point. I'm wrapping up the epilogue right now... 31st chapters later.)
5800165 but of course I recognize a good author when I see one
due to
wearing
he was very wealthy
Though, on a side note...Why do you use past tense? Or switch tense back and fort for that matter?
This feels wrong and out of place somehow...
He didn't nit-pick or anything. He just like to profile the characters.
Him and James are Avid "Bronies" as it were
He spread himself out to learn all he could. However, he did have one thing
only to immediately turn, close, and lock the door
He walked over to his desk, an antique his father got him. It was an old desk with a square mirror on it like some sort of masculine vanity.
Ugh...I got everything that hit me over the head with a baseball bat in my sleepy state.
I like it
Would love to know how a person can be six foot negative four inches 6' -4" :P
7943433 easy, be 5'8