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Noooooooooooooooooo, Soarin', you can't be a cupcake, noooooooooooooooooo
Don't make Soarin' into a cupcake dude, he must break out and get Spitfire and continue on there rape adventures
Eh, not bad, clop-wise.
1076137 I think it's obvious he is pretty dead....
Cupcakes was so overrated but if you can do this right ill support you!
I think this is the first time I want to smack you in the head with a big'ol piece of metal pipe... you know you are going to kill me with all that suspense don't you?
bastard
BTW, shorter and not so detailed clop scenes.... I aprove!
Y'know what? I like the Cupcakes take.
It does add a ton of tension and suspense to the story. Derpy is a character that everybody adores, so having her as Pinkie's tool or as an eventual target is just EFFFED up! But in a good way. Personally, I think Derpy should be the one to take her life. But aside from the constant murder going on... Can you kill Berry? Can her number come up. That'd be an interesting way to cross the subplots.
I think this whole threesome thing shouldn't be over yet. There must be more conflict I mean... come on! Twilight never gets to make tough decisions, she can't just stay neutral.
stellar writing, as always. Hope you get internet back.
1100614 woaw... who the characters kills is not for me to decide. I'm just writing this story as it plays out, hoping for a good ending myself.......
1103135
Freakin' three different things going on at the same time! Sometimes more than that! I'm not intelligent enough to follow what's happening to everypony. Well anyway, the clop was still good even if it was short. You have not ost me as a follower... I know that must mean the world to you.
1103155 meh, it's just four different couples searching for the same pony, unaware of the new character about to slip into this story
PPL pls The red stains were from food coloring and red icing. Right? And I thought somepony knew about the Applejack and Twilight scene, not something else (surprise plot twist)
Alright, who just got cupcaked? I'm starting to think that Pinkie is the bad guy here. Soarin's and Spitfire's roles in this story are pretty confusing. Are they just some rapists who got caught, and now the former is dead and the latter is a pleasure doll? Does it actually have anything to do with the plot or were they just some nice(disturbing) add? They could both have some foalhood traumas which made them do that. That would be logical. I don't know. I love SoarFire. That's why it bothers me.
But the story is very good. Really enjoyable. (Most of the time) Can't wait to see more. Take your time!
I just need a second of your time.
Thank you!
1115419 I think it's safe to say that Soarin' is pretty dead. As for your opinion about the past's effect on people through life... I agree with you. And it was kind of explained by Celestia, they were in short terms "ponies with too much money and too few hobbies".
1118684 okay... f-for what?
TROOOoooOooooolLLLlllLLin'!
1124323
Yeah, I know. But are you going to introduce Spitfire anymore? I know she's pretty broken right now, but- even though I don't really know her personality or your future plans- I can clearly see her regretting everything she had done with Soarin'.
1127988 I can't spoil anything more than that Spitfire is still alive... Sorry, but I'm sure It'd ruin the entire story if you knew too much
1176273 I'd like to blame intolerant and "closed-minded" people. Some only read like, the first three chapters and then writes me an angry reply in which they blame me for NOT having a disclaimer....