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Readers are worms, and cliffhangers are fish hooks preventing us from going away until it's all over.
Honestly, the diminished number of clop in later chapters is a perfect way to proceed with the story without too much wavering. I can follow this more smoothly when the chapters aren't almost complete pony-porn anymore. And as I've stated before(I guess) the clop is great, nothing to complain about, but too much is always too much.
That said, it's good to have this story alive again. Update whenever you want, I can wait.
I'm sorry that this review is pretty short and doesn't say much, but right now I'm too tired to write much at all or even think straight. School and shit...
Good luck!
3203389 I if anyone should know what you mean. Thanks, mate
heeey, finally found time to read this
also.... a cliffhanger? REALLY???
Great chapter btw, and finally explaining what was happening with spike